Love the story based on summary. Can you please edit the story. Will try reading it. If you don't find an editor I can do the same for you.Look forward to reading it.

Loved the book, expcially the development of characters and story line,if possible I would love to have the book on free reading for 24 hours, cannot buy coins ,

name of the raw title please?

i really like your work and the story line. But this novel needs some serious editing. Its more like machine translated which makes one lose interest in the story.

i really like your work and the story line. But this novel needs some serious editing. Its more like machine translated which makes one lose interest in the story.

i really like your work and the story line. But this novel needs some serious editing. Its more like machine translated which makes one lose interest in the story. Can you have it edited please?

i really like your work and the story line. But this novel needs some serious editing. Its more like machine translated which makes one lose interest in the story.

i really like your work and the story line. But this novel needs some serious editing. Its more like machine translated which makes one lose interest in the story.

i really like your work and the story line. But this novel needs some serious editing. Its more like machine translated which makes one lose interest in the story.

i really like your work and the story line. But this novel needs some serious editing. Its more like machine translated which makes one lose interest in the story.

i really like your work and the story line. But this novel needs some serious editing. Its more like machine translated which makes one lose interest in the story.

i really like your work and the story line. But this novel needs some serious editing. Its more like machine translated which makes one lose interest in the story.

i really like your work and the story line. But this novel needs some serious editing. Its more like machine translated which makes one lose interest in the story. I really want to continue the story, can you please have it edited?

i really like your work and the story line. But this novel needs some serious editing. Its more like machine translated which makes one lose interest in the story.

I really like your work and the story line. But this novel needs some serious editing. Its more like machine translated which makes one lose interest in the story.

I like the story line and the characters. But this novel needs interesting. Its more like machine translated with no sequence which makes one lose interest in