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Review Detail of shazueca in Brockwing Vale

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shazueca
shazuecaLv23yrshazueca

The thing I love most about this book is the word choice of the author. It's inspiring both as an author and as a reader, the chapters are riddled with amazing uses of metaphors and vivid imagery. The characters are well written, Jake is surprisingly funny. The world building is just enough information to keep you fed yet still curious for more. The only thing I would change is the pacing, it's a bit too quick and I would prefer to have more time to indulge in the characters and the events. But it really doesn't take away too much from the novel, a great read!!

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Brockwing Vale

Craig_Beckham

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Craig_Beckham
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Thank you so much for this feedback, it means a lot. I'll try working on my pacing next and see what I can do. That's the thing I love about writing, we're always learning something new.