Reddeath78
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I couldn't even finish this one it's so bad, MC is xenophobic racist and those are the nice things I can say. The premise of the story is ok, kinda over used but it's almost its own genre at this point. No real development just lots of deus ex machina going around really I struggled to read the first 1000 chapters after that my head hurt too much to go on.
Story premise is used to hell and back but has the chance to be good but the writer just keeps dragging everything out no real development I had to give up on it at eventually after struggling through 350 chapters avoid this thing like COVID if you can
I really like the story but I have to give it a lower rating because a lot of the chapters don't flow right, you'll have one thing happening at the end of a chapter and the next one just goes off some direction completely off the wall making absolutely no sense what so ever biggest one I can name off hand is from 159 to 160, she killed all the performers and the next chapter is talking about a technique no congruence in the flow what so ever, other than that great story
kinda interesting idea for a story but the mc is just to much of gotta hide stuff and be a wimp, I read the chapters until now but I'm dropping this it's just too stupid with no development going on just always I'm great but I have to put up with my wife's family to make her happy when she's just a stuck up brat in the end
Tried reading it but was only able to get about 40 to 50 chapters in and had to drop it. It was ok to start but really it's just to cliche, any plot device you can think is used making it just a generic cookie cutter story that's been done over and over again in multiple stories in this category, if you're looking for something you've read before with different character names then this is the one for you.