I love it

harder

I just wanted to give a normal review but I can't judge because there are only 2 chapters. I want the author to keep posting so we can give our honest review 😜😜😜

amazing 😁😁😁

bye

man....are you sure the writing is concise. It keeps mixing things that's hard to understand

I stopped reading after the first chapter so you don't have to worry about that. I'm not interested in being an audience to some narcissistic author too

you are justifying everything he does.

Man you don't have to make everything clear. Have you never heard of the saying " Show not tell" All the talking makes it worse. Don't you have faith in your readers. We shall conclude everything, don't conclude everything without letting us think ourselves.

I'm your audience. I'm the one who reads what you present.

especially that last part when the young girl thought he was pleasing to the eye made it seem forced

You should learn how to accept criticism and correct them. I'm not here to eat you.

ohh the cringe. A pretty girl was running for her life when she fell and the MC shouts "watch out" when there are many others being eaten too. How did he pay attention to her and not the gruesome things happening around him

I love the author and I read the MVS. But his naming sense throws me off. He doesn't choose a grand name. Only a simple basic name. My vampire system and now we have my werewolf system. I mean...huh..Maybe names like Fullmoon werewolf or I Werewolf hunger or werewolf ambition. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

what about Reverend Insanity

wow, he just transmigrated from a normal world but doesn't freak out at the sight of wolves and even roars at them. MC you need to chill. At least show you belong to another world.

exactly. How can you name a ferret that is ruthless and scary flower fox?