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Iros

Iros

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Just looking for a good book to read.

2019-01-19 JoinedCanada
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  • Iros
    Iros1d
    Replied to Vanika_Siminovici

    the idea was to show a side of the Saiyan's that wasn't really covered in the anime. it was hinted at in Vegeta's past so i wanted to give a few chapters to flush it out more.

    Ch 26 Saiyan Showdown: Battling Brothers and New Allies
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    Saiyan Primal Ascension
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  • Iros
    Iros1d
    Replied to Vanika_Siminovici

    well I'm sorry it wasn't up to your standers. while I am still learning as an author I understand that i will make write things people will not like. it comes with the territory of writing for fun, but I'm glad you gave my story a try up to this point. and hope you can continue to do so

    Ch 26 Saiyan Showdown: Battling Brothers and New Allies
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  • Iros
    Iros1d
    Replied to Vanika_Siminovici

    yes i know the difference between a murder and a warrior, now if you were hoping for me to be able to write a character that fell in between those two. im sorry to disappoint you but im not that good.

    Ch 10 Seeds of Ambition: The Saibamen Challenge
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  • Iros
    Iros4d
    Replied to Vanika_Siminovici

    'Shall we conceive powers for the reincanator, which she will then neither remember nor know anything?' I'm going to be honest, I'm not understanding the question?

    Ch 37 Decisions and Divisions
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    White Dragon Hidden in The Leaves
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  • Iros
    Iros4d
    Replied to Peacemaker2_at_

    I'm sorry you feel that way.

    "I am unfamiliar with that creature, could you please explain what it is." The goddess asked and so Aiko when into great detail. (Female Ghidorah) "So it would be a creature similar to the Otsutsuki" Humming in thought "Very well your wishes have been granted however its Chakra level will be marked by the number of horns, and it will only gain more horns. You will learn more of its ability once you two manage to speak." As she said those words the child in the first orb had, had its hair change from a dark black to snowy white with a moon and star birthmark at the center of its stomach.
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  • Iros
    Iros5d
    Replied to real777

    I know..... a lot of characters can now...

    "Now dear those wishes, speaking of them there are things you cannot wish for. such as immunity, omnipresence, the ability to forcefully make others love you, and anything related to dragon ball z." Looking at Aiko with a knowing look.
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  • Iros
    Iros6d
    Replied to P_J_Sch

    hybrid are scary

    "Well we can talk about that later," Just as I finished those words a large spike in ki appeared behind me around Raditz space pop as it exploded and a child with a tail was flying. "LEAVE MY DADDY ALONE!" Shouted Gohan as she charged at me.
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  • Iros
    Iros6d
    Replied to Aaron_Chong_6689

    to late lol.

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  • Iros
    Iros6d
    Replied to Aaron_Chong_6689

    yeah, I believe I'm doing a good job on scaling my story. Nothing to broken and it makes sense.

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  • Iros
    Iros6d
    Commented

    so what's the pun? what vegetables is it based on?

    'Daiko! Yeah, I'll just name myself Daiko, it sounds Saiyan enough.
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    RE: THE LEGEND!
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  • Iros
    Iros6d
    Commented

    well I see what you meant now. but yeah be Hella strong from the start.

    PL (Power Level): STR + AGL + END * 500 = 20,500 ( Forcibly Suppressed to 350) - Energy regen per second is 0.5% + 0.2% per second
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  • Iros
    Iros6d
    Commented

    well at least it's not the broken kind that let's you buy DNA or power ups.

    [STATUS
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  • Iros
    Iros6d
    Commented

    eh I guess that works

    He kept the original DBZ Broly's hair since he preferred that version more.
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  • Iros
    Iros6d
    Commented

    Why so tall?

    First, he selected his new height, to be 6,8. Which was the height of Super Broly.
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  • Iros
    Iros6d
    Replied to Aaron_Chong_6689

    I'll hold you to that

    "My next wish is to have the gamer's system." The soul asked once more.
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    RE: THE LEGEND!
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  • Iros
    Iros6d
    Commented
    Awakening...
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  • Iros
    Iros6d
    Commented

    please let me know bow you felt? could their have been something I could have done better? or is there something I should change?

    Ch 26 Saiyan Showdown: Battling Brothers and New Allies
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  • Iros
    Iros6d
    Posted

    Alright let's see what you have. remember mine is at the start. I'm here to judge lol

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    RE: THE LEGEND!
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  • Iros
    Iros6d
    Replied to Aaron_Chong_6689

    oh? I take it you have a fanfiction? cause I'll be the judge of that.

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  • Iros
    Iros7d
    Replied to Random_Entity

    I take it you liked it?

    "For my last wish..." my eyes flashed with determination, and my voice took on a darker tone. "I want the alpha werewolf power from the teen wolf series, with progressive forms I can transform into. I want the ability to make my own pack, free from the influence of the Daedric Prince Hircine. Make the power my own."
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    Elder Scrolls True Daughter of Skyrim
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