Iros
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Iros11dReplied to P_J_Schit's all good. it's better to fix it, then to get he same repeated comments about it
"I Must say Paul you know what you want and the Way you worded it is ,at least to my Understanding, Superbe, Granted and bevor you go a Request from me to You, Visit me here and ther will you? Sharks may be more often than not be Solitary Creatures but not all of them Are" said Etharium with a bit of a Pleading Tone to Paul, wich made Paul flabbergasted on how much Etharium reminded him of a certain Storm Dragon who is Friends with a Slime- Iros11dCommentedCh 1 A New beginnig...
- Iros11dReplied to P_J_Sch
not a bad wish
Paul smiles in Joy "my Second Wish is that I can Eat things and Absorb the Traits of what I Ate, like say I eat Vibranium than now I have Traits of Vibranium in my Body or Variable Tractor Beam than I can use that Tech" - Iros11dCommented
your missing a E on (there) some mistakes on spelling but that's a Givin to any writer.
"I Must say Paul you know what you want and the Way you worded it is ,at least to my Understanding, Superbe, Granted and bevor you go a Request from me to You, Visit me here and ther will you? Sharks may be more often than not be Solitary Creatures but not all of them Are" said Etharium with a bit of a Pleading Tone to Paul, wich made Paul flabbergasted on how much Etharium reminded him of a certain Storm Dragon who is Friends with a Slime - Iros11dCommented
maneater? that was a good game, love the choice for design.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Iros11dReplied to PrimalWhiteStarElrond's eyes softened, and he raised his hand to show me the ring. "This is Vilya, the Ring of Air," he explained. "It is one of the three Elven rings of power."
- Iros11dReplied to PrimalWhiteStar
for now
The days after the healing ritual passed slowly. I often found myself lost in thought, grieving the loss of Awalion. Her memory haunted me, and the pain of her absence was a constant ache. I could only be glad that Arnovia wasn't there at the time. I didn't want to lose her as well. And the fact that some of the members of the subjugation team survived as well. I might be able to bring forth a Deadra and get information about what happened in my home world, but there would be the chance that they would inform their Deadra lord. So I want sure on how to move forward. - Iros11dReplied to PrimalWhiteStarCh 49 Whispers in the Garden
- Iros14dReplied to NightroPulse
my bad ill fix it once I sleep
I turned his gaze towards Goku, who was currently helping Gine settle in and set up what seemed to be a kitchen. "I will speak with King Yama," I decided. "In the meantime, continue guiding the others in their training." - Iros14dReplied to NightroPulse
my bad made this chapter while tired as hell
As I opened his eyes, he saw Goku approaching with Gohan, one of them looked curious and the other was eager to join the training. I motioned for Goku to come closer. "Goku, I have made arrangements for you to train with King Kai," I explained. "As I have already taught you everything, I know it is time for you to get taught by a new teacher. You must be ready to leave soon." - Iros14dReplied to Chris_Matte
what?
Alone at last, I studied the symbol of the four-star Dragon Ball floating before me. It shone with an otherworldly glow, a beacon of hope in the darkness. I hesitated for a moment, considering the implications of what I was about to do. But there was no turning back now. With a deep breath, I clenched my fist and punched the symbol. - Iros14dReplied to Chris_Matte
yeah she did
"I don't know if I can go through with this mission," I admitted, my voice cracking a bit. "How can I kill innocent people? I've never killed anyone before?" - Iros17dReplied to P_J_Sch
should be fixed
This paragraph has been deleted. - Iros20dReplied to P_J_Sch
no not really. Krillin is stronger even now.
Fasha smirked. "We're here to help, old man." - Iros23dReplied to PrimalWhiteStarCh 47 A Glimpse of Despair
- Iros24dCommentedAyumi took a deep breath and bit her thumb and I noticed her rather long sharp fangs, letting the blood well up before signing her name on the scroll. Then, with a determined look, she formed the necessary hand signs and slammed her palm onto the ground.
- Iros24dCommented"Kurokane," the snake replied. "You have proven yourself worthy, Ayumi. Know that if you become unworthy I will devour you. So don't fail me"
- Iros24dReplied to PrimalWhiteStar
No spoilers
Elves in silver armor approached, their expressions a mix of concern and curiosity. Their presence was both calming and intimidating, their armor glinting in the sunlight. My vision began to blur again, the pain and exhaustion catching up with me. As I finally succumbed to unconsciousness, the last thing I saw was the gentle, worried faces of the elves standing over me.