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Dunno how I managed to mix them up lol. Thanks for pointing it out.
thanks.
Ultimately, I will be reusing a lot of the basic creatures for random BP masters & trainees. It's just easier compared to trying to think of an animals design for every tamer, and given how I added the concept of breeding and selling the same animals to multiple people, I have to show it as well. I like the idea you mentioned though, giving real names for significant creatures.
I have to say, for a character that I used an existing template for, I spent a rediculous amount of time designing him. It was far easier designing Amber and John. I wanted to hit people with the nostalgia for those that would recognise him, while making enough changes so that I wouldn't get hit with writing an existing character into my story. His beasts too, once I reveal them, I can't buff them off screen so to speak. This guy is a Paragon character type, for reasons that will be revealed, although some can probably guess why. I altered the cloak, hair colour, clothing, and the original didn't have much of a personality, so writing one in fixed that issue. Some beasts, likewise have been changed. Lance used to give me nightmares when trying to best him in Pokemon Stadium 2 using rental Pokemon.
hmm, I don't think I explained myself well before. Ultimately, just claiming it as a 'rare 10,000 year old awesome plant' or something just won't cut it. People in the fictional world would have found some, and the Gov would certainly be searching the known areas such an awesome plant' would grow, sending high stage forces. And not even to use it, but to try grow more and expand it's supply, for long term growth. It's usually how a force focused on long term growth would act, instead of pillaging and using it immediately. Even if they were ignorant of such a plant, who in their right mind would eat a random plant. They would have to be aware it could increase their growth in the first place. Which leads back to the first problem. Just having Jamie be lucky is kinda a cop out. I can use that maybe once, but not repeatedly.
I'll admit, I've always kept that kinda option available from the get go. It's a pretty common occurrence in cultivation novels. He's not even stage one atm. He's simply too fragile, especially considering the collateral destruction his beasts will be capable of at later stages. The trick will be to make it rare, and something sparingly used, because if I use that trick all the time, the logical question people will ask is "if he can do it so easily, why can't other people in the story do so as well." I can maybe pull it off in the first portal entry, after all, the human race has just started exploring it. Maybe make a fruit that is toxic to the natives, beneficial to humans. It would kinda explain why other humans wouldn't have tried it. I'd also have to explain why he eats it though. Ultimately, I'd need to think more on the idea. Thanks for the idea.
Thanks. I don't plan on quitting this one. If I decide to start a new story the release schedule for this one will slow down to maybe 2-3 chapters per week. I have in mind starting a survival type story, that I think will be more suited to the readers of webnovel readers interests in general. Best of all, for the most part it won't require me to do research.
Thanks. I don't plan on quitting this one. If I decide to start a new story the release schedule for this one will slow down to maybe 2-3 chapters per week. I have in mind starting a survival type story, that I think will be more suited to the readers of webnovel readers interests in general. Best of all, for the most part it won't require me to do research.
Meant to be Jamie, thanks.
Meant to be Jamie, thanks.
Thanks, I'll fix it now
I'm the writer, and I'm biased. Sue Me. I ended up writing this for a Taming writing prompt .What you can expect from reading this is a weird mix between Pokemon and Xianxia, while having the focus on people living a western ethos, plus adding my own ideas into the mix The whole story starts when something hits the fictional planet. The occupants of this fictional planet had lifestyles similar to ours before it got hit. I'm focusing on the Taming aspect while throwing in aspects of the protags day to day life, slowly exploring the changes in the fictional world that the people have taken, and how it changes day to day life on a broader scale. In terms of plot, I will focus on the protags slowly getting stronger, earning recognition, along with action scenes and various conflicts. Just keep in mind, it will be slow, as I want it to make sense, and not just constant fights caused by a legion of spoilt children, and I will be trying to throw in the stuff I mentioned in the paragraph above, hopefully in a way that it adds to the story, rather then detracts from it. If that sounds like something you might be interested in, give it a try. I'm very interested in critical critiques you may have after reading, so feel free to point out any shortcomings find by posting a reply to this review or post a comment in the chapters. Have a great day everyone.
Just reread this comment. Initially, my understanding was that you were asking why humans could bond with other creatures and get perks from it, while it seemingly didn't work the other way. At this point of the story I have spread enough information throughout the chapters to answer that, although I will show the answer in a blatant manner later on. If your asking why humans don't have any perks outside of bonding creatures, well, they do. I introduce Martial Warriors pretty early on. The way they get power is similar to the other creatures. It's just not getting the focus because Jamie is not taking that path. Hope that clears up any confusion. Take Care.
Thanks for pointing it out, meant hoarse, as in the way a voice sounds.
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