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EternalEden

EternalEden

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I like fantasy novels. Maybe someday I'll write one and contribute to this site. We'll see.

2018-12-31 JoinedUnited States
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden2d
    Replied to LongShlong

    Jessie or James?

    The king of Nanazhao basically said, 'Double it and give it to the next person.'
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    More than a Dragon Warrior
    Movies · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden3d
    Commented
    The king of Nanazhao basically said, 'Double it and give it to the next person.'
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    More than a Dragon Warrior
    Movies · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden3d
    Replied to Gumpta

    No, the skills only cost 1 point last time because they were weak frog skills.

    Well, after he levelled up a bit more, he was running a bit low on skill points right now.
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    Konosuba: A Scottish Dragon In This Wonderful World
    Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden6d
    Posted

    The story is rather entertaining, and the adventure was interesting to follow along with. The pacing was good in some places although a bit too fast in other places. Still, it led to some plot events that were worth seeing so this can be forgiven. The grammar is rather shaky however. The massive jump in power right when he gets his stand is a kind of a turn-off. However, at this point, there wasn't really much on the planet that could be his enemy anyway. So I guess this negative aspect is at least not terrible. Then there's the near godly power that continues to grow. And to top it off, the many new concepts being thrown around left and right without giving the readers much time to adjust isn't great either. Honestly, at this point, I was just numb to the endless power-ups. I kept reading however, to at least see how it ended. I'll be clear, this makes quite a number of mistakes which isn't great, but it's still pretty good. Kinda like junk food, you know the stuff is bad, but that doesn't stop many from enjoying it. And I enjoyed this too.

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    KONO DIO DA! [Complete]
    Anime & Comics · SR_2027
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden6d
    Replied to SR_2027

    Honestly, I wouldn't really call a 3-star story "good". To answer you though, I might think they're a bit weird, but this is the internet, so it's not exactly new. However, I can't help but notice you didn't say a single word against the critiques in my review.

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    Overgeared: Transmigrated as a Super Named NPC but also as a Player.
    Others · Unleashed_Echo
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden6d
    Commented

    Ain't no way Edo Tensei only cost 100. It should be at LEAST 1000.

    The original price is 100 ninja coins, and the beginner discount price is only 20 ninja coins!
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    Marvel Ninja God
    Anime & Comics · nyawdao2
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden6d
    Replied to SR_2027

    I've actually written over 60 chapters of story, thanks. Rather amusing that you'd try and call me out for my lack of effort in writing when you yourself didn't bother to put in any effort into your response. :) Also, the author has DOZENS of 4 and 5-star reviews praising them. I doubt a negative review would actually demotivate them to stop writing, but if it did, then they'd need to grow much thicker skin.

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    Overgeared: Transmigrated as a Super Named NPC but also as a Player.
    Others · Unleashed_Echo
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden7d
    Commented

    Sasuke: "Orochimaru? Who cares about that creep? No I need to find a way to follow Fujin..."

    Meanwhile, Sasuke clenched his fists and thought, 'So Naruto has been getting the help of someone that strong? No wonder his strength has increased so rapidly. I need to get stronger faster as well.'
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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
    Fantasy · Devil_Hex
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden7d
    Replied to Tyler_rigby

    Ikr?

    Those who did not sign up or who were not old enough stamped their feet and beat their chests in regret.
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    The Strongest Dark Lord
    Movies · Mysteryon
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden7d
    Posted

    The one star is more for balance to make the rating closer to what it actually is. If I had to give a real rating, it would be 4 or 4 and a half stars. There is real quality here, and aside from a few gripes listed below, it is honestly quite good. The story IS rather good most of thetime, I can certainly say that. Though it does have a bit of a rocky start and takes a bit of time to get good. Also, the romance is a bit cringy to be honest. Not only is the main character essentially a role player which feels rather awkward at times. Not only that, but the story follows the extremely overused cliche where the love interest is a non-human who's been treated so horribly by others that merely showing them common decency somehow means the world to them and makes them instantly start to develop feelings. And as usual, they start off as a servant/slave that is treated semi decently, until their relationship becomes something more. Also, the story is very good at giving details and descriptions. However, sometimes it goes overboard and drags scenes out longer than they need to be. Especially when the story constantly praises and fawns over the main character for being so beautiful, mysterious, special, and any other positive adjective you can think of. It's excessive. Despite all of this, it is still a very enjoyable story that is worth the read.

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    Overgeared: Emperor of Midnight
    Book&Literature · Vostarian
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden9d
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter. No harem though please. There really shouldn't be a harem, especially with how bad the author handled the possible addition of Jean. (No offense.) Jean: "Oh no, I accidentally mind-spied on Rogue and the MC's naughty time! Oh no, my clothes burned off in front of the MC! Oh no, the phoenix thinks we're together, how embarrassing!" Bruh, this is 6th grade rom-com BS. You're better than that author.

    Ch 215 213 - Summoning Magikarp
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    MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM
    Movies · NunuXD
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden9d
    Posted

    I'm giving the story one star, not because it deserves it, but because I've seen way too many mindless five-star ratings, so this is for balance. If I were to give an honest opinion, I would give the story about three stars. The progression of power that the main character gets is way too fast, so it doesn't feel earned or satisfying. This becomes even more broken when the main character obtains an ability that lets him steal all the powers and skills of someone who he is fighting. At this point, his growth isn't something that people can look forward to. Why would they? He barely has to put in any effort. Especially since it can be used 4x a day. This problem is a rookie mistake. In addition, there are some aspects of the story that really don't make sense. Like the Great Sage ability which is given an A rating, and yet it is somehow able to replicate something with an SSS ranking. Literally makes zero sense. Another downside is that the story explains way too much about the background and game details. I can understand trying to help others who haven't read the original story, but this just drags out the process and makes it more tiresome for those who actually have. Y'know, the story's MAIN audience?

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    Overgeared: Transmigrated as a Super Named NPC but also as a Player.
    Others · Unleashed_Echo
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden10d
    Replied to TheMacGuffinMan

    Jesus pal, eat a Snickers or something...

    Ch 102 Expected Results
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    Reborn in bleach as a hollow with a system
    Anime & Comics · Prognastat
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden10d
    Commented

    It's an honest mistake, we've all been there...

    'Yeah about that.." The monkey king scratched his cheek, "I found out that I couldn't survive the explosion of ten barrels of gunpowder."
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    More than a Dragon Warrior
    Movies · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden10d
    Replied to TheMacGuffinMan

    We as readers have a right to express our opinion, so feel free to share yours despite being uninformed, and hypocritical.

    Ch 102 Expected Results
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    Reborn in bleach as a hollow with a system
    Anime & Comics · Prognastat
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden12d
    Commented

    *Dye

    The only person he was looking for was Mystique, but knowing that finding her would be more difficult than finding a drop of eye in an ocean, he just gave up.
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    MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM
    Movies · NunuXD
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden12d
    Replied to GGloserzz_69

    8 days late, but no, he wasn't. He was a scheming genius who tricked and killed the king of the frost giants and would've annihilated their entire species if he hadn't been stopped.

    'If Thor can no longer mature or even misses the game so much that he will also stop progressing, won't I be the only possible heir to Asgard?' Loki thought excitedly as he began contacting his informants across the universe.
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    MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden14d
    Commented

    Enough talk, commence with the punching!

    So whether I was leading it or Shen was leading it, our strategy would be pretty much the same. In fact, I think it was more suitable that the creator of the weapons strategize on how to best use his weapons.
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    More than a Dragon Warrior
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden14d
    Commented

    Tai Lung: "What if we had mini cannons that every soldier could use?"

    Of course, it was not hard for Tai Lung to give ideas as he had knowledge of another world. Especially when it came to the usage of gunpowder, let's just say Tai Lung had to keep himself from saying too much.
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    More than a Dragon Warrior
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden14d
    Commented

    Yep, simple adventure...

    'Let's go kill the Faceless and eat their souls, maybe steal some assassin skills...20 minute fucking adventure, huh?'
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    Floating through the multiverse
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