I didn’t know about how I felt this book at first, but after the debut of the meaning ‘Kill The Sun’ my interest has piqued. I love where it’s headed, all the characters, the world building, and the vast differences in the class system. This truly is a world that puts the phrase, “ dog eat dog world” to good use.

great first chapter, thank you.

Yea, this story isnt over in the slightest. idc what you say warm. this isn't over lol great story though. I really did enjoy the ending, but like I just said....it's not over. 🤣 Ily

I'm not writing another Shang. Theres only one.

it really isn't disrespectful. that's just your own perspective. bottom line, there's more to this story. plus artists pass their work on all the time .there's been multiple stories with multiple writers. Superman, DC, Star Wars, and Boruto to name a few . I acknowledged this a wonderful story, and deserves to be continued. warm built a great foundation for Shang to take on many adventures. it's crazy to me that warm doesn't see potential, or maybe they do. maybe writing that story is to draining, and they want to move on to another project while building a universe because again warm has that capability.

lame

there could be so much more to this story . Could I take over as writer? Id really enjoy for this story to continue.

GRAZIE! GRAZIE! BRAVO! BRAVO!! What a wonderful chapter so brazy. I hope Shang gets the chance to love.

wow, it's almost unbelievable that he'd be that much stronger than them, but at the same time it speaks about their complacency.

eeeeeeee, someone can fight back!! this is exciting.

blonde hair and I think blue eyes? idr but I know he's blonde, white skin tone and wears a black suit.

I must admit Warm really does keep me guessing. I have no idea what to expect.

*Final Fantasy 7 battle music ensues*

that sounds so cool

thank you

oh do y'all suggest I read the first then? 🤔

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Lash!! Yes that was his name. such a cool name too .

my three favorite characters in this story are George, Gregorio, and Shangs first student that he killed after leaving that lake. i don't remember his name.

oh my goodness, WHAT HAVE YIU CREATED WARM?!?!? 😭 NY DEAR SHANG, OUR BABY ALEEEEX!! We miss you fat boy 🤣 this is insanely good writing though. I appreciate your hard work.