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This is beautiful. I finished 40 chaps in a zoom! Damn! The story is well written. The netizens kinda ignoring/accepting the fact that he is speaking like a fortune-teller is weird but overall the development is super great. Many may say it's the same repetitive face-slapping kind plot but each character has their own story and flavor and that's what makes this novel so beautiful. Thanks Author! [img=update][img=update][img=update]
Okay the book was good till Chapter 45 where author for some unknown reason started to "improve" their writing quality. Author, its's fine to try to improve your novel's literature's quality but please keep in mind that adding adjectives multiple times in a sentence makes it really arduous. Nor are the readers so literally eloquent that they instinctively understand the subtle underlying meanings of your vivid lines. From these lines you can see the change. Sometimes easy language means good communication. It got frustrating when sentences that could be said in 20 words were stretched to a paragraph of 100 words by adding unwanted adjectives. Some in the review said "No filler" . Well, the words themselves are the filler, my fellow Daoist.
Rasengan!!!
Idk if it will get better but from first 20 chapters, I got cancer. The author has tried to bring a new style of things but its's completely disharmonious. The emotionless Heavenly Dao is Crying!
Chinese translation of Sharingan I guess?