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Void457

Void457

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2018-12-08 JoinedGlobal
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  • Void457
    Void4577mth
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    This is beautiful. I finished 40 chaps in a zoom! Damn! The story is well written. The netizens kinda ignoring/accepting the fact that he is speaking like a fortune-teller is weird but overall the development is super great. Many may say it's the same repetitive face-slapping kind plot but each character has their own story and flavor and that's what makes this novel so beautiful. Thanks Author! [img=update][img=update][img=update]

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    Shocking the Whole Internet! You Are Not a Psychologist at All!
    Urban · Netizen 13
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  • Void457
    Void4578mth
    Posted

    Okay the book was good till Chapter 45 where author for some unknown reason started to "improve" their writing quality. Author, its's fine to try to improve your novel's literature's quality but please keep in mind that adding adjectives multiple times in a sentence makes it really arduous. Nor are the readers so literally eloquent that they instinctively understand the subtle underlying meanings of your vivid lines. From these lines you can see the change. Sometimes easy language means good communication. It got frustrating when sentences that could be said in 20 words were stretched to a paragraph of 100 words by adding unwanted adjectives. Some in the review said "No filler" . Well, the words themselves are the filler, my fellow Daoist.

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    Cultivation: Start From Upgrading My Computer
    Eastern · Biting Wind
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  • Void457
    Void4578mth
    Commented

    Rasengan!!!

    "Spicy God Dried!"
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    There Is A Huge Problem With My Achievement System
    Urban · Tianluo Lightning Flash
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  • Void457
    Void4578mth
    Posted

    One of the few refreshing Cultivation Webnovels where sect members got brain instead of just being outrightly stupid like : "You dare look at the girl I covet?! I will slay your nine generations!!" Really enjoyed a lot. Thanks Author! Update faster pleaseee!

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    My Life as a Cultivator in a Game
    Eastern · Blue Sky And Heavy Rain
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  • Void457
    Void4578mth
    Posted

    Can anyone please add the "Feel good" tag to this novel? It is quite relaxing and the pace is good. Just an average feel good novel that you need once in a while to relax from all those shitty and overpowered novels. Thanks Author!

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    As a Magnate, I Started Checking in at a Convenience Store
    Urban · I Want Mangoes, Not Mangoes
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  • Void457
    Void4578mth
    Posted

    Idk if it will get better but from first 20 chapters, I got cancer. The author has tried to bring a new style of things but its's completely disharmonious. The emotionless Heavenly Dao is Crying!

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    Worldwide Auto Transformation: Invincibility Starts With Ultimate Enhancement
    Games · I'm Feifei
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  • Void457
    Void4579mth
    Commented

    Chinese translation of Sharingan I guess?

    Fortunately, he didn't have Shura Yan, or else the Uchiha family would have another hero.
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    My Items Have an Upgrade Panel
    Sci-fi · Wolfberry is not Tasty
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