Review Detail of Void457 in Cultivation: Start From Upgrading My Computer

Okay the book was good till Chapter 45 where author for some unknown reason started to "improve" their writing quality. Author, its's fine to try to improve your novel's literature's quality but please keep in mind that adding adjectives multiple times in a sentence makes it really arduous. Nor are the readers so literally eloquent that they instinctively understand the subtle underlying meanings of your vivid lines. From these lines you can see the change. Sometimes easy language means good communication. It got frustrating when sentences that could be said in 20 words were stretched to a paragraph of 100 words by adding unwanted adjectives. Some in the review said "No filler" . Well, the words themselves are the filler, my fellow Daoist.