The story is still in its early stages for a complete critique, but I have read some of your other works and I can say that this one has potential. You don't need a groundbreaking idea to continue, just keep the writing mature and focus on developing your characters. I understand that the first chapters rush things, because we want to see the encounters, but it would be more impactful if you developed the setting and environment before that.

Come on author, be nice to us, how about a Power Stones goal for you to post new chapters faster?

Author, do you think it would be plausible for Takuma's hard work to attract the attention of one of the Jonin in the plot to train him? Maybe Maito Guy? Although Takuma's style is that of a ninja who fights much more strategically, I can imagine him catching Guy's attention

Author! Do you plan to approach shadow clone jutsu more realistically? It is generally used in other stories as a mega tool to get stronger quickly, And Takuma, being a monster of effort, could have exaggerated growth, do you plan to do anything to maintain his standard evolution?

Someone post the photo here in the comments please, it's not possible to see it on mobile

Personally, my interest is not in the lemon with female characters, but in the reactions to someone with superpowers in a (at least partially) realistic world. For example, the scene with the council president questioning the protagonist, not knowing how he could have done that. I would appreciate it if this theme were more explored. See you.

It's interesting so far, I hope for a development with Eve and Roxxy!.......................................................................

Becca

Missy

I would humbly ask for a development with roxxy, I think that after she became a girlfriend there should be much more scenes, after all she is on the cover of the game

Great story, although the ending seems rushed, I understand, after all you are a single Author and continue with sagas and sagas that increase the challenge of the protagonist could saturate the story, that said, you commented on a possible new fic after releasing the story of one piece,How about a suggestion? You could approach the universe of berseker, I think it is extremely rich and developed

Well, my opinion about the story: about the translation: I use Google translator, but the fact that the reading remains fluid shows that the semantics and grammar are great, you update frequently,That's great, now the story development, that's fantastic, that's his asset, there's a realistic perspective of what would happen if a real person were in the world of Naruto, I don't understand why People are offending you for this, the character development is pretty nice, but if you could describe his appearance more that would be cool, or should I assume he looks the same on the cover of the story? Finally the background, because it centers on the protagonist who knows the world of naruto relatively, this is quite acceptable, that being said, it is a great story, please continue and do not be shaken by Those pessimistic comments

I thought it was a good decision, I think you better put the MC as the original raj and him having to develop himself, the game elements seemed to make it too easy. +1power Stone

hmmmm, reincarnate me as kazuma from konosuba. (darkness he he he)

do you plan on approaching the DC universe at some point?