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Well, my opinion about the story: about the translation: I use Google translator, but the fact that the reading remains fluid shows that the semantics and grammar are great, you update frequently,That's great, now the story development, that's fantastic, that's his asset, there's a realistic perspective of what would happen if a real person were in the world of Naruto, I don't understand why People are offending you for this, the character development is pretty nice, but if you could describe his appearance more that would be cool, or should I assume he looks the same on the cover of the story? Finally the background, because it centers on the protagonist who knows the world of naruto relatively, this is quite acceptable, that being said, it is a great story, please continue and do not be shaken by Those pessimistic comments

Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve

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