this story and all the storys from the author are like a Monkey wrote it. All usual norms of a story are thrown out the window. -speak- instead of "Speak" Names and in general sentences are HORRIBLE Hedwig is called Balkia DUDE are you mad?! Harry reffers to shop owners as Master Krum is KRAM This Silly things are everywhere. IT CANT BE THAT HARD to proof read it and to get names right. This author 100% google translate his storys from other authors.
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