When you say NSFW you mean smut? If yes, then please put a warning in the beginning and in the end of the scenes so is easier to skip.

Obey the pure blood gods you mortals!

Oh, I'm hating this "a lot of my friends died and I will joke around" thing that is going on. If this isn't a incredibly elaborated plan I will be very disappointed.

Thanks for the chapter. Author, my friend, my pal, love of my life, this fic is one of my favorite HP fics, if not my all time favorite, so I don't say this in a mean way, this last, 50 or so, chapters have been soooooooooo slow, please pic up the pace. Or post 10 chapters daily, that would be cool too. Okay, love you, bye.

Danzo is the principle, Aizen is the Vice-principle and Sasuke and Obito as the disciplinary committee. (who I forgot?)

Oh my... Another one to the Danzo school of severely underestimating Yuna. Rarely ends well

Oh wow, that escalated quick! "Hey! you there, you looked to this extreme famous tourist attraction for more than a minute. Are you a criminal or a cop?" "Neither" "Okay then, I will beat you up". This is the most NPC talk I ever saw

WOW, I too hope the author is being sarcastic here, is wild make Nami saying this. What's next Sanji will say that no food is better than bad food?

Helluva Boss ep 1 client, forgot her name (if she even have one)

Who can forget the person call Villains right? Be careful with his brother, Anti-Heros to!

I can believe a leopard can jump a distance of 50ft or fall from 50ft without being injure, but not jump 50 ft high.

A lot of people already said this but I want to write my review. I drop this fic at chapter 70, witch I think is enough to judge. The fic is very well written and the concept is great, I really like this system, nothing grand and simple to understand, no quest, no personality, just stats and levels with the ability to redistribute the stats one time per month, flexible and not op by nature, but very op if use right, I like it. The problem is that this isn't the focus of the story, this fic is, above all, a harem/smut fic, and the type of harem fic that if you are a female and speak more then 2 lines with the mc is to late, you fall in love and want to share him with everyone. From the moment the mc get OFA his development stop and all the focus is in the smut/harem, maybe this is for you, but I don't care for harem (and this type of harem where everyone fall for the mc because he is the mc is particularly bad for me) and I don't like smut. The mc get OFA more or less chapter 20, at chapter 70 no significant progress has been made, just him fucking people. This fic isn't bad, if you like smut this might be for you, is just not for me. P.S. WebNovel has this annoying habit of round down the number of star in the review, so to be clear, my score is 2.8

I just notice that in the review I assumed that Chibi_mon_mon was a guy, sorry if its wrong.

Oooohhhh boy, brace yourselfs, this will be a loooong ass review. First, none of my problems with this fic come from the translation, the opposite actually, Chibi_mon_mon do a great job translating (and adapting), I would have dropped if was not for it. But still is one of those chinese fic with all the cliches. Now, my problem with this fic is the MC, he is just not likable, a MC can be good, bad, grey or whatever, but he must be likable! For me the worst part is that Ron (the MC) is a jerk but the author (not Chibi_mon_mon, there is a limit to what he can do for the story as a translator) keep try to paint him in a good light, example, "Hey, I kidnap you because you are hot and will make you stay in my ship against your will but I not going to rape you, I'm such a nice guy." and immediately after he kills a bunch of innocent merchants "but he is a pirate, so it's ok because pirates do that". Is hard to me explain here without the context, the problem is not that he is evil, he is not, is that the author want the MC to do whatever but still make you think he is good. Would be so easy make him more likable, kidnap the person but say she will be free after he show the corruption of the marines by that point she will want be in the crew, kill the merchants then review they were slave traders, etc. etc. Or just go full dark side and stop try making him look good. Ok, I rant a lot about this, final points, it's a typical power fantasy, every hot woman will love the MC, he is immediately overpower and whole bunch of face slapping. Overhaul is not the worst thing you would read, for me is the type of fic I probably will never finish, is kinda fun until I get bored. If you like this kind of power fantasy you might like it.

Yes, but if they don't sell it or tell the world it doesn't mean much. Most of the world doesn't even know. Imagine you are unemployed and have a house made of gold that you won't sell for any reason, your house might worth a lot but you don't have money, you would still be poor, you could build a garden and be self sustainable, but still, no buying power, so still poor. Poor is not about quality of life, is about amount of money. The reason we put the value of business and houses when calculating how much money someone have is because they can sell it to get the money, if you put how much vibranium cost in Wakanda's amount of money they are rich, but, again, they would not sell it.

God this fight never end! please, move on. this battle should have ended 5 chapters ago.

Just to know, whats up with the fate and got tags? I never saw fate, would I lose a lot because of that?

Well, he have adamantium claws, so his skeleton should probably be adamantium as well

It's a 5 min job discover who the kid is with this info, right? Who among this children we can't confirm the parentage? Oh, the kid with all the Uzumaki trades? thats a surprise!

So it's not wrong, just badly/weirdly wrote?