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I am a novel and fanfic reader and an amateur translator in his spare time.
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I must say that sometimes I feel deceived by novels that say that the protagonist is a being who has lived several other lives or that he is an ancient monster, simply because in the first chapters that you read the protagonist is actually an unripe fruit with his actions and attitudes that don't show even a little bit of his level of intelligence or mentality that he should have in this case? I think if he was supposed to behave like a beginner he should have simply forgotten or locked those memories and then recovered them later, as this would avoid this type of inconvenience when reading something expecting one thing and you receive something completely different, author-san se I've been reading my opinion, sorry for my real rant here hahaha, good luck and great reading to the readers, bye ;)
I really liked the fanfic, it's beyond many that are multiplying like rabbits with a harem theme on the site, but I didn't expect the author to use *clones* or as it was explained almost omnipresently, I think the story simply lost meaning for me at that moment, I'm not using this or saying that the story gets bad after that, it's just my opinion about using cloning skills or having multiple bodies to be able to satisfy your women or MC's time with them in this case, in my opinion it's a way I'm lazy to solve the problem in any way, I'm stopping here and leaving my humble opinion author-san, again the fanfic is very good, well written, but being an Ecchi story don't expect much development of the world or characters, bye bye ;)
The original version is one of the best fanfics I've ever read, I was looking forward to the reboot and I'm glad it started, the author wishes you health and creativity to make this fanfic an improved version of the old one and an incredible story, as it won't be the same something about the original version for new readers, if you're unsure whether to read the old one or wait for the new one - I recommend you read the original because even though it's two different stories, it's still a very good fanfic, one of the best on this site... waiting for the new chapters ...
The theme is interesting, but the way it is executed leaves a lot to be desired, the chapters need editing. But more problematic than that, the MC's personality has nothing to do with Jinwoo, it seems that someone (generic) went into the body of the shadow monarch and now tries to live like him, and without intelligence too... Funny... I expected something similar to the DXD:Golden fanfic... and really if you include jinwoo it would make a very interesting finfic, I hope the author is successful in this endeavor hahaha
No, there is no Yuri, I don't know the number of women for sure, there are many but I don't know the exact number. And yes, his aunt enters the harem, which takes a hell of a long time to happen, near the end in this case. I'm not going to lie, this novel could very easily have been a sequel, but it all depends on the author, as some of the girls weren't developed until the end (sleeping with the MC) and the ending was kind of rushed.
It was an interesting journey, with ups and downs, but with an emotional and somehow perfect ending? I thought there could be more, you know, more women, more wonderful and exciting moments... But like everything in this life that has a beginning, there is also an ending, and in my opinion it was what it had to be (good).
A very interesting proposal, the grammar is very good, the development of the story so far is excellent. The mix of LOTM and HP, like other worlds, is something different here, it draws a lot of attention, it is a very well written fanfic. (Now from what I read there will be romance, but the question remains will there be a harem?)
The beginning, in this case, the volume (worm) was a bit overwhelming, because not only is I a fan or I know the worm line, but after it goes to the other world it becomes much more interesting and I say that the fanfic so far is very good. I hope you continue until the end, your fanfic is really good, I'll definitely be following the development of this story!