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While info dumps can be boring you have a lot of ground to cover. I would say try and make an action scene or something with dialogue to use the information instead of firing it out. That doesn't mean you can't drop in information especially if its something the MC knows or has recently learned. As a writer its up to you to decide how much is too much. I'm know to have the opposite problem I don't give enough information leaving readers confused. Its one of those things where you need to be conscious of and practice. I hope I'm making sense man. But seriously a good start to your novel in my opinion.