Dang! That's a twist that I did not see. I really like this fanfic because you have the same elements of a lot of fanfics and rearranged them in a way that it makes it refreshing to read. I hope this continues author and I wish you a long life so you can keep typing xD

I patiently wait for this story to continue because I find the story enjoyable [img=update]

Just... Writing is fine, it's eligible But the pacing is horrendous The character personality does not make sense with the reincarnations. While the genre it's fiction . A story must be still grounded in some way. Even Cultivation novels have some rules to them but the story presents itself loosely .Plot elements put in so haphazardly. Stability is mediocre since it has only been 15 chapters The world explored as of current is trash. Nothing is explained except that It's "Heaven", Naruto world and MCU world. It looks like a mess to me.

if the authoris not telling us then its a good thingso we the readers can notice it ourselves

😂 no worries Ein

Ok that's cool That's three crossovers now in MC's world besides the dimensional traveling Marvel DC Godzilla

lol Einlion with chicken references Saaikon will soon be bygone. Soon enough, there is an archon with them for christ's sake XD Thanks for the chapter :)

Author Did you drop your other book Please let that not be the case

hope you continue to write soon!

just don't leave us hanging too much!

ok!

ok that was amazing nothing else needs to be said

I love the description of O'Death as herpes XD

sadly it's omake

derflinger is our dragonborn XD

ok great plot point is a good sign

lol fair this a really old review XD

neato

bonk

lol this is an old comment