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DarkDawning

DarkDawning

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Hello I like Fan-Fics and originals if they are interesting

2018-09-26 JoinedPhilippines
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  • DarkDawning
    DarkDawning1mth
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    The writing quality is decent. I find that the plot of the story is good (as of chapter 22). The specifics that I want to talk about is how the story looks cliche(because there was a trend of NPC in Overlord fanfics) but is quite full of substance.From my understanding, we start out with an MC that's quite optimistic/excited at the prospect of reincarnation, a bit morbid but understable because the MC gets to have abilities unlike his previous life. That's where it gets interesting , we shift from here to where we see the MC showing grief, having truly bonded silently in service to their creator. Character design I'll say is debatable so I'm putting it at 4 stars, to be optimistic.Updating stability is in the same boat.Where I'm particular is world building. The descriptions feel a bit lackluster, I would have a hard time immersing myself if not for the provided images and me being familiar about the Overlord media.TLDR;criticism on world building

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    Got Stuck in Overlord as a NPC, Now I'm in Sothoryos?!
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  • DarkDawning
    DarkDawning3mth
    Replied to sandman_wake

    they were low quality spirit and the narrative said she used the materials the dead demonic cultivators had to reinforce the formation

    Slot 4: Formation Mastery [Grade 3] (11 Days)
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    Reincarnated as a Jade Beauty?!
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  • DarkDawning
    DarkDawning5mth
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    馃檹馃憠馃憟馃憣馃馃馃枛馃馃馃馃馃馃馃馃檹Reader Style: Infinite Begging JutsuI need more chaps! 馃槩 馃ズ

    Ch 112 Empire's Path and Summoning
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  • DarkDawning
    DarkDawning5mth
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    I wanted to write a this comment because I wanted to get my thoughts on this book. The books before this are of decent quality as I can see that from Elder Blood Witcher's aura of being laid back with little consequences to Unbound Familiar's more dark themes, most striking of which is the self sacrifice of one of the characters and the MC's descent to madness and return to some semblance of sanity. What I'm saying is that so far, this book has reached the deep end for me but not to the point it's not unreadable for me, yet its close. It is nearing the point of it's all tragedy. It felt like moments in the book are all portrayed as something completely negative. As someone who has read the previous books, I am happy that the author is not sticking to one genre but this is a plea from this reader that some moments of the author's story are coming as overly negative but maybe that's just me. Please tone it down? Maybe we're past all the bad stuff and the MC has hit rock bottom and is about to rise up which is a guilty pleasure of rooting for the underdog. But then again this is fiction and maybe I'm getting swayed too much by the words.

    Ch 22 Curiosity Made The Cat
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  • DarkDawning
    DarkDawning7mth
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    Five stars all around, finally finished the novel today and I feel fulfilled. It was truly a 'Magical Journey'Excellent writing quality due to consistency of work, Story development is done well because of great pacing, Character Design was also good because character action was in line with personality shown, Updating stability is excellent because it can ve seen that it is one of the few stories that is completedWorld background is what I wanted to talk about in depth because generally I set it at 4 stars or lower because an author is using a setting that is set by another writer. Why i think this fiction deserves 5 stars is because compared to some othrr novels, the author of this fiction has expanded on the setting in a way that made sense, made it exciting and made it fresh. A big problem generally in fanfiction is the lack of innovation in a setting and so i applaud the author on the new elements they added. The added elements were tied in completely ,to innovate and do it well is something worthy of applause. An example of this is 'soulbond' HP fics if done well then it makes for something heart-warming but do it bad then well... this added element just detracted from the whole story and it comes off as 'cringe'tldr; fic is worth reading, you should read it

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    HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
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  • DarkDawning
    DarkDawning8mth
    Commented

    as a person I do really dislike cat but as a reader I understand where Cat is coming from but still it just looks like cat still doesn't understand how the city works.it will exploit you until you die or not even that. It even exploits you in the afterlife

    Ch 290 Kid-Napping
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  • DarkDawning
    DarkDawning1yr
    Commented

    Dang! That's a twist that I did not see. I really like this fanfic because you have the same elements of a lot of fanfics and rearranged them in a way that it makes it refreshing to read. I hope this continues author and I wish you a long life so you can keep typing xD

    Ch 57 Is it wrong to force it?
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  • DarkDawning
    DarkDawning1yr
    Commented

    I patiently wait for this story to continue because I find the story enjoyable [img=update]

    Ch 114 Happily Ever After
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  • DarkDawning
    DarkDawning1yr
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    Just... Writing is fine, it's eligible But the pacing is horrendous The character personality does not make sense with the reincarnations. While the genre it's fiction . A story must be still grounded in some way. Even Cultivation novels have some rules to them but the story presents itself loosely .Plot elements put in so haphazardly. Stability is mediocre since it has only been 15 chapters The world explored as of current is trash. Nothing is explained except that It's "Heaven", Naruto world and MCU world. It looks like a mess to me.

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  • DarkDawning
    DarkDawning1yr
    Replied to Left_Nut_Of_Madara

    if the authoris not telling us then its a good thingso we the readers can notice it ourselves

    Ch 31 CHAPTER 30
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  • DarkDawning
    DarkDawning1yr
    Commented

    馃槀 no worries Ein

    Ch 70 Quick Notice
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  • DarkDawning
    DarkDawning1yr
    Commented

    Ok that's cool That's three crossovers now in MC's world besides the dimensional traveling Marvel DC Godzilla

    Ch 23 Chapter 23: Coulson is sweet boy
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  • DarkDawning
    DarkDawning2yr
    Commented

    lol Einlion with chicken references Saaikon will soon be bygone. Soon enough, there is an archon with them for christ's sake XD Thanks for the chapter :)

    Ch 64 Duplicity
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  • DarkDawning
    DarkDawning2yr
    Replied to Jmwells2003

    Author Did you drop your other book Please let that not be the case

    "So Danzo was right," Mom murmured.
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    Reborn in the Elemental Nations
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  • DarkDawning
    DarkDawning2yr
    Replied to _Ram_

    hope you continue to write soon!

    Ch 413 I am back! (And important notice!)
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  • DarkDawning
    DarkDawning2yr
    Commented

    just don't leave us hanging too much!

    Ch 31 State of novel.
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    A New Hope, Nier
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  • DarkDawning
    DarkDawning2yr
    Commented

    ok!

    Ch 31 State of novel.
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  • DarkDawning
    DarkDawning2yr
    Commented

    ok that was amazing nothing else needs to be said

    Ch 205 CHAPTER 205(Unstoppable VS Unstoppable)
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    Elementalist in a dungeon(Danmachi fanfiction)
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  • DarkDawning
    DarkDawning2yr
    Commented

    I love the description of O'Death as herpes XD

    Ch 47 Chapter 47
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    The Eager Dimension Hopper (SCP)
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  • DarkDawning
    DarkDawning2yr
    Commented

    sadly it's omake

    Ch 221 Smelt All Over
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