Review Detail of DarkDawning in Re: Hulk

Just... Writing is fine, it's eligible But the pacing is horrendous The character personality does not make sense with the reincarnations. While the genre it's fiction . A story must be still grounded in some way. Even Cultivation novels have some rules to them but the story presents itself loosely .Plot elements put in so haphazardly. Stability is mediocre since it has only been 15 chapters The world explored as of current is trash. Nothing is explained except that It's "Heaven", Naruto world and MCU world. It looks like a mess to me.