Review Detail of DarkDawning in HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Five stars all around, finally finished the novel today and I feel fulfilled. It was truly a 'Magical Journey'Excellent writing quality due to consistency of work, Story development is done well because of great pacing, Character Design was also good because character action was in line with personality shown, Updating stability is excellent because it can ve seen that it is one of the few stories that is completedWorld background is what I wanted to talk about in depth because generally I set it at 4 stars or lower because an author is using a setting that is set by another writer. Why i think this fiction deserves 5 stars is because compared to some othrr novels, the author of this fiction has expanded on the setting in a way that made sense, made it exciting and made it fresh. A big problem generally in fanfiction is the lack of innovation in a setting and so i applaud the author on the new elements they added. The added elements were tied in completely ,to innovate and do it well is something worthy of applause. An example of this is 'soulbond' HP fics if done well then it makes for something heart-warming but do it bad then well... this added element just detracted from the whole story and it comes off as 'cringe'tldr; fic is worth reading, you should read it