It's interesting. Reminds me a lot of those reincarnation anime/manga and I'm guessing there is some inspiration drawn from there. So far it's looking pretty good, but I'm waiting to see what he actually does to change anything.

You keep saying teenager, but wasn't he in the body of a 10 year old? Or did I misremember that part?

I kind of liked it! Hope he becomes a bit more talkative once he gets more comfortable in his situation. Not like Hermione, but a bit more.

I understand that you don't have the answers here..I'm just confused and willing to rant 😅

But then the MC and his group must be at least 7 years older than him, so how did they meet when the MC was 4? and Kakashi was clearly not exactly a newborn back then, since he started wanting his mask.

Don't microwave boiled eggs. They tend to explode.

If this leads to him becoming yet another boring, braindead, cold, killer MC then I'm completely out. I was really hoping this would be an MC with actual feelings and a good mindset.

Overall very nice, though we're yet to see what kind of changes the MC will bring to the world. So far we've just gotten the prologue basically of him in the academy. He saved his sister, and Hinata is stronger and won't end up with Naruto. Those are the only real changes so far.

I am so confused when it comes to the timeline and the ages of people in this fic. From the timeline I can find, in the 38th year of Konoha Tsunade was like 12 years old, Kakashi wouldn't be born for another 13 years, and the second ninja war wouldn't start for 2 more years. But we met Kakashi in an earlier chapter. and you said that the MC and the group would be in their 20s during the Nine-tails attack...but Kakashi is like 13-14 years old when that happens..so how could the MC have met him when he was like 4 years old? It's all just very confusing to me. Fair enough if you've changed some ages, I'd just like to know them so I can keep track..

Had forgotten it existed. Now I dislike it even more than I did back then.

isn't that just like rainforests and stuff, though? and very specific kinds of scorpion? Though I could be wrong, not my area of expertise. It just feels like a very odd choice of main pet when the MC is in Konoha. It feels off, like you just choose it to be different for no reason.

but you labelled it as Harem. Is it a harem story where the girls just want to be with him, but he refuses because of his sainthood?

Scorpion? this is supposed to be Konoha...right? Not Suna or something..

Yeah okay this is pretty cringe..MC act super unnatural, and very odd. He clearly can't keep a conversation with anyone if he talks like that. The library of heaven's path which i was looking forward to was used in an incredibly boring way. Overall, the MC is trash. And not the good kind. The story seems to be him just chasing chicks, which might fit some people. I was hoping for more. You need to work on how to write both descriptive text and most importantly dialogue. It just doesn't flow well anywhere and nobody talks like actual people.

promise*

Don't overwork yourself. and don't overpromose either. you're doing great! I'm just happy i don't have to go through the mtl myself...

This right here must have been written by an incel, nobody can convince me otherwise 😅 But also, if you actually were concerned about it, the godly system kind of requires people to have remained pure in a sense for their entire life in this universe. This is why characters with more than one partner never reach the same heights in the godly realm. Not that it would matter, but I can guarantee that she is a virgin.

I mistook her birthday. I thought it was in September...So she's 11, and she would be like 145 or so. Especially since she has tall siblings.

Bruh, how short do you think 12 year old girls are? She should be around 150cm tall, so way taller than his 120cm.

could someone confirm how many chapters there are in the raws? I can't copy the title to search for it..