Review Detail of LORD_INDRATH in Harry Potter : Transmigrating as Cedric
Review detail
This fanfiction is very different from the standard of a transmigrator/reincarnator. As we know, you can't escape human desires, especially if you have something that takes you beyond others like the system, transacendent power or some special talent. That being said, the story has a system that forces the MC onto the path of justice and that whole saint and virgin story.
Harry Potter : Transmigrating as Cedric
LORD_INDRATH
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Ikaru5:Well, I dropped it too much bs that makes zero sense to me. I hope someone can rewrite this into a proper story.
The idea is great but you need to re-read your story after having an AI check it. Like, calling houses “Academies” is just too obvious a mistake. If you want reader that actually speak English to be able to read this without forgetting their language you need to edit the story.
LORD_INDRATH:Sorry to hear that, I hope you got a better novel
Ikaru5:The idea is great but you need to re-read your story after having an AI check it. Like, calling houses “Academies” is just too obvious a mistake. If you want reader that actually speak English to be able to read this without forgetting their language you need to edit the story.
Write a chapter named looking for editor or proofreader, and then people will approach you. Give them one chapter to proofread and correct, take it back, and post it ask for feedback. Best you start with chapter 1 and have them re-work the story. After some time you’ll get patrons and now you can pay the person a small fee as thx for their work.
LORD_INDRATH:Thanks for advice but problem is that, i don't know how to do that.😅