Dragon5162
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Dragon51626dCommentedstart of repeated paragraphs
"I see you have already met each other." Asked Muramasa after the introduction. He was a famous businessman and a high ranking noble of the land of tea.- Dragon51626dCommented
Who is dennis?
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Didnt he tell the goblins he bought the egg off some shady dealer or something?
Agustus smiled and replied, "Thank you, sir. She is indeed a wonder. I was lucky to find the egg in my family vault , during my first visit to Gringotts, I hatched her with the help of my butler. We formed a bond then, and she has been with me ever since. Her name is Skadi, after the Norse goddess of winter and hunting." - Dragon516213dCommented
This is the start of a repeat of what was said at the beginning of the chapter
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parts of the chapter
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more repeats
With a smile, I said to Neji, "Thanks for the training. Bye!" before running off to find Naruto. - Dragon516220dCommented
repeated
This paragraph has been deleted. - Dragon51621mthCommentedCh 67 Chapter 67: Strange Predicament!
- Dragon51621mthCommentedCh 46 Dropped - Sorry
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i had the same thought
2: MC vs Logan is a brawl rather then weapons so no blood left behind - Dragon51622mthCommented
Should have what's being said in ” to make it easier for people to know when someone is talking. It makes it stand out more in my opinion. example: "Good morning, how are you?"
ROB: Good morning, Abel, as you can see, you may be thinking, I am Rob, an immensely powerful being, I am part of a legion of omnipotent beings, but who are immensely bored. - Dragon51624mthCommented
Started to repeat
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I dont like how this turned out, but its not gonna stop me from reading.
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force user
(Which path do you think Jial will take?) - Dragon51629mthCommentedCh 19 Ch. 19: The Unforgivable Curses.
- Dragon51629mthCommented
Horrible.
Cornelius looked at the now-dead body of his supposed friend with a smile still on his face and said ''Sorry buddy, it was nothing personal. but I can't bear to eat another damn apple on this island'' Cornelius then picked up a knife and handled it deftly between his fingers - Dragon51629mthCommentedCh 10 question!
- Dragon516210mthCommentedCh 9 Chp 6