The story seems okay. It needs some editting though.

I’ve enjoyed reading this novel very much. I’m adding it to my list to keep up with it.

I found this to be a very enjoyable story. It’s kept me interested, so I’ve added it to my list. My only critique is the editing of the novel. There are minor mistakes here and there. The author should also go back to delete a few passages that were unintentionally left in.

I will delete this post once you see it and write a new comment.

I did not know that. I will update my rating and edit my comment. My apologies. I still added the novel to my list because I actually did enjoy reading it quite a lot. Let me tell you, my new rating will reflect what I really wanted to post originally.

Not my cup of tea. Least I can do as a reader is advise the author to edit their story.

From what I’ve read, the story seems fine.

This writing style and story telling is not for me. I find the change between first person and third person very jarring and not helpful to the story.

After reading all 16 available chapters, I have to say, the story is not bad for a rebirth and revenge premise. Please, please, find someone to edit or proofread before posting.

Too few chapters to truly have an opinion on wether the story is good or not. Not surprised by the types of characters written at all. I can only advice the author to get an editor or proof reader.