Too few chapters to truly have an opinion on wether the story is good or not. Not surprised by the types of characters written at all. I can only advice the author to get an editor or proof reader.
So far, the read was good. Although, the incessent miserable life of a FL isn’t what I expect to read at all as the chapter progresses further.
As there aren’t any chapter to read along after Chap. 10, I can just wait to see how the story unfolds once it’s published soon.