Tempuscineris
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I am interested in reading some good light novels.
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Tempuscineris19hCommentedCursed --> Curse
Ligno'vsh was about to lose control of her body. The Cursed showed signs of overwhelming her. Michael was curious how much Lig's fighting style would change once the Curse took over. Would she be stronger, or would her fighting style be filled with wild, instinctive movements?- Tempuscineris2dCommented
faint --> feint
Lig's body bulged, and her physical prowess increased drastically. She charged Michael again and appeared before him swiftly. Lig punched him, forcing Michael to teleport away once again. However, it was a faint. Lig spun around her body and kicked Michael in the face as he appeared above her. - Tempuscineris2dCommented
gruntend --> grunted
Lig – Ligno'vsh – gruntend quietly, clearly not liking Selena's words, but she didn't dare to reject the Nest Leader. Selena patted Lig lightly on the back while her vibrant, fairly annoying smile never ceased. - Tempuscineris2dCommented
Neast --> Nest
The Neast Leader made an enticing offer, one Michael couldn't reject. He would be a fool to reject the Nest Leader's help. She was the strongest being he'd encountered. Her help would impact greatly. - Tempuscineris4dCommented
Nets --> Nest
"This is Selena Ryn. She is the Leader of the Nets and one of its Founders," Eren introduced Selena to Michael, who nodded slowly. - Tempuscineris17dCommented
shaper --> sharper
Frost not being one to behave passively responded in a similar fashion. Wisps of cold fire formed around his body, lowering the surrounding temperature while his own aura clashed against Indra's, refusing to cower from the provocation. From the initial tests the two of them were roughly on par, neither gained any ground over the other despite their difference in makeup. Frost's was heavier, denser and more defensive in nature while Indra's aura was shaper, more destructive and better suited to relentless aggression. - Tempuscineris1mthCommented
town --> down
[Good work. It will take some effort to cut a road town the hill and across the other side, but we can do that easily enough with all of us. As long as that other bridge is as good as it looks, we should he home in time for lunch.] - Tempuscineris1mthCommented
consolidating --> consulting
Immortal Knight, the Untamed Army, and all members of the Untamed Awakened continued to work hard. They grew stronger and attended the monthly championships that Rebecca Zauber had initiated after consolidating Michael thoroughly. The championship winners were given a large number of Jungle Points that could be used to purchase Spirit Armaments, Artifacts, Soultraits, and a wide variety of other stuff. - Tempuscineris2mthCommented
Wolfe --> Karl
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earing --> hearing
Even though I had almost a photographic memory, my memory of earing was falling behind a little. - Tempuscineris3mthCommented
Awakeend's --> Awakened's
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Haha, fair enough!
They all stared at Rui like he was an alien that landed from outer space. Their stares were wide-eyed, their silence was loud, and they naturally parted ways for Rui as he walked through the crowd. - Tempuscineris4mthCommented
The original paragraph said "They all stared at Ves ..." are you Exlor, the author of "The Mech Touch" using a different account?
They all stared at Rui like he was an alien that landed from outer space. Their stares were wide-eyed, their silence was loud, and they naturally parted ways for Rui as he walked through the crowd. - Tempuscineris4mthCommented
little greater --> little slower
Abandoning a guard and haphazardly dashing for a takedown mid-strike was a very dangerous thing to. He could have easily been knocked out, or he could have completely avoided the strike if he was skilled and experienced, the only reason the strike didn't knock him out was because Fae had been caught off-guard, thus her reaction time was a little greater than normal, she wasn't able to adjust the trajectory to strike him in time. - Tempuscineris4mthCommented
become be --> be
"Father said that if I didn't get into the top five, my play time would become be replaced with more training. So I just barely made the cut." He replied with a tinge of relief and defiance. - Tempuscineris4mthCommented
heat of --> heat off
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prize --> price
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Ravensein --> Ravenstein
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infiltrate --> infiltrated
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