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cooolbooy4mthCommentedI am having a very bad feelings about this sentence
Harem: Women with whom you have formed a relationship regardless of whether they are wives or slaves]- cooolbooy4mthCommented"You actually bring a girl home, the world will be destroyed, Tokyo will sink—"
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not square root its sqaure of level
'Primis: Square root of my current Level.' - cooolbooy4mthCommentedCh 42 Chapter – 42 (Dungeon (Part 3))
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are all the gates have problem with their installation
CREAK!!!! - cooolbooy4mthCommentedCh 37 Chapter – 37 (Eina is Special)
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not just cringe this chapter is cringe overdose
*A/N: CRINGE in this chapter. - cooolbooy4mthCommented
i think its inner monologue
'Ais: *sigh* How long will Riveria takes? But I have to say I never thought so many wants to know about "The Black Swordsman". Well, I won't say that I am not interested but still. *sigh* It's still boring just sitting her and doing nothing. I really want to go to dungeon to kill some monsters to increase my level fast.' - cooolbooy4mthCommented
Mommy is saying why don't you introduce yourself properly to my daughter-in-law
[That's not what I mean. I mean you left without even saying goodbye to them. You didn't even tell them your name.] - cooolbooy4mthCommentedPrimis: Know your place. Here I am in control not you.
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I have a feeling that in the story he will try to merge it in his body and it will become his kingdom of god
Home: A personal world for the Host. - cooolbooy4mthPosted
Story is okay ,it could have been better if anime choices were good,most of the anime chosen are not rundown onesThere are many flaws in writing MC character design,I had a feeleing that author was not sure what character design to choose for MC but as the story progress he had made many changes to it which made it a little bit of hodgepodge
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where's my promised loli
A sweet voice entered Ye Kai's ear, as he looked over and saw a girl around 17 years old. Her hair reaches her shoulders, and her big pure eyes with a huge smile on her lips, showing her white teeth. - cooolbooy7mthPosted
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i am speechless
Thinking of this, Leon suddenly remembered, didn't he still have more than 12,000 experience in his pocket? ! ! - cooolbooy7mthCommented
when i read sword eyes and deep eyes,my first reaction was to chech all the reviews to chech whether i am at right place
A gray-green army uniform, with a close-fitting design, makes the young man's tall and straight figure more outstanding. The slightly raised sword eyebrows lined the trimmed short brown hair, making those pale blue eyes extraordinarily deep. - cooolbooy7mthCommented
why do i have a feeling that story will shift towards cultivation
In fact, this is a manifestation of mental influence over matter. It affects your mind and strengthens your physicality... - cooolbooy7mthCommented
i think during the time of 1st birthday of ultron he will be back
"That's right. I've invested a lot of effort in adding many advanced technologies to it. If it can't even find its way back home, it would be quite embarrassing. However, the matter is not over yet. Hawkeye, Thor, now you can seek your retribution and settle your grievances!" - cooolbooy7mthPosted
Firstly, the way of writing is poor .There is no rhythm in the storySecond there is too much of self talking and self assesment of the host about his nature as if to justify and convice us readers around 10-15 chapters till now are just filled with his status And what the hell are the quotes at the starting of every chapters and repeated 3-4 paragraphs from the last chapters .It feels like you (author) are writing for the sake of completing your set target of word countsI started reading this novel for solo levelling up but I think I dont got what I was promised.Every time I went to next chapter in hope to see any improvent in the story it always disappointed me