Firstly, the way of writing is poor .There is no rhythm in the storySecond there is too much of self talking and self assesment of the host about his nature as if to justify and convice us readers around 10-15 chapters till now are just filled with his status And what the hell are the quotes at the starting of every chapters and repeated 3-4 paragraphs from the last chapters .It feels like you (author) are writing for the sake of completing your set target of word countsI started reading this novel for solo levelling up but I think I dont got what I was promised.Every time I went to next chapter in hope to see any improvent in the story it always disappointed me
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