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Vishe4dCommentedCh 55 Chapter 55: Individual Skills Assessment (1)- Vishe14dPosted
- Vishe20dCommented
what does it mean?
Now, it was Shinobu's turn to be surprised. "You knew about it?" - Vishe25dPosted
It was a great read in the initial chapters, it closely depicted the characteristics of Hikkigaya and merged well with the DxD plot. It started going a bit downhill for me after the tragedy with Hikkigaya loosing some of his personality traits, although a bit disappointing i can accept it as a process of character development. but the thing that annoys me most is the whole fiasco with raynare becoming his slave and how much he puts up with her antics. It seems like a very crude attempt to further the plot by introducing an unnecessary annoying character. i hope she will have no significant appearance in the further plot or atleast improve her behaviour.
- Vishe2mthCommented
shouldn't this be 2 million?
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the POV shift seems a bit sudden.
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his* >> her*
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who is seiryu
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The other listened closely and felt like Midas' Non-Agression Pact was incredibly effective. Midas said no, there was a lot of trickery that could be played and Midas feels like it might be played. - Vishe2mthCommented
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And shut up they did. Heck, some people even infiltrated the factionless settlements and started touting the Alliance's great Plan. Apparently, the Alliance were the good guys in the story. - Vishe4mthCommented
isn't he concerned that they are being watched?
"The visions you saw were real. They were memories from my last life." - Vishe4mthCommented
It would be a bit less confusing to call her okaa-chan as bakugo is also referred to by the same name.
Releasing his mother's shoulder, Izuku replied, "Okay, Kaa-chan. Take your time." - Vishe5mthPosted
Great story, the world described is very vast and there is a lot of scope of expansion and introduction of new material. There are always some exciting developments which keeps you hooked to the story. Although I believe the character development of MC has been a bit slow, it's still gratifying to see him learn from mistakes and try to become a better lord. My only request is that Tiara is, if not the sole one, at least one of MC's lovers.
- Vishe6mthCommented
right to one-> eight to one*
While Branden didn't give an explicit order this time, his underlings answered it like that was the case. They were five hundred meters away, and the enemies were exactly where Branden needed to be… while the enemies outnumbered them right to one, the soldiers still charged toward the enemies alongside the mercenaries. - Vishe6mthCommented
Author I think all the comments prior to a certain time has been deleted.
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should be 8:30
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Avril*
—(Well done, Elle. Your lying is becoming more fluent, hahaha!)