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Singularity21

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The singularity born from the collision of storms

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  • Singularity21
    Singularity2110d
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    The amount of grammar mistakes. 🤦🏻‍♂️, pls get an editing software ( there’s a lot of free ones) . It really throws me off trying to understand what’s intended from what’s written.

    Ch 1 End Of My Horror
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    Master Of Horrors
    Fantasy · Ordki_Hozei
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211mth
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    The premise is good and I he system seems decent too but the speed of plot advancement and the irrelevance of cultivation throws you off. There’s no political intrigue. It’s more of a action cultivation novel where the mc is an emperor. The worst is the inconsistency in translation, which ranges from names of the empires, cultivation levels, characters and more. Even the mc’s name has a George in it at one point for some reason. In conclusion, even if the plot is decent with potential, the translation leaves it abysmal to read.

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    Invincible Divine Destiny Selection System
    Eastern · Dancing Silly Cat
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211mth
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    @author This book is so good. But there’s a lot of grammatical errors. It could be solved if you had grammarly or an editor, and would improve the quality of the writing drastically.

    Ch 289 Chapter 123 Good Body Shape
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    Catastrophe Card King
    Games · Blindness
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity215mth
    Commented

    Which country is this black palace from ?

    Ch 4 Chapter 4: High-Efficiency Healing Liquid (Seeking Recommendations and Reviews)
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    Serial Player
    Horror · Riding Waves To Find The Boat
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity219mth
    Commented

    I don’t mean the sound rude but I really like the story and think you’re doing an excellent job with the plot so far so I hope you take my advice. Find an editor or something like Grammarly Pro. There’s spelling errors and repeated and rephrased sentences that reduce the overall quality of the work and the story content conveyed. It is my belief that It would increase the quality of your writing if you can address these things.

    Ch 70 Situation out of Hand? (1)
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    Rebirth of the Ruined Noble
    Fantasy · Emberlight
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity2110mth
    Commented

    The Illuminati would’ve hit better. I’m not loving illuminatos

    Ch 239 Lady Fate
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    The Deceitful One
    Fantasy · PandaDumpling
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211yr
    Replied to lierra_0522

    It’s more likely to be plot armor. The fool path’s authority has fate and spirit related stuff so it’s probably influencing lumian. And he probably needs it since he’s in the crosshairs of an outer god.

    Ch 50 Observation
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    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211yr
    Replied to AMIR_REZA_KAZEMI

    I think that’s more for ritual than acting. Klein didn’t have to do ritual for ancient scholar potion but still had to act to digest didnt he ?

    Ch 37 "Dangerous Forest"
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    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211yr
    Replied to Pandoraisme

    I don’t it’s the beyonder part alone. Ut might have to do with the fool’s symbol protecting him too. Aurore is a sequence 7 and yet, she doesn’t remember so I’m inclined to think it’s Klein’s influence along with being beyonder that let him remember this time. It might also be why Fors can’t interfere, she might become part of the loop is she invokved herself directly.

    Ch 32 Anomaly
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    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211yr
    Replied to God_hole

    True. It’s seems unlikely he ll become a red priest, considering the ritual requirements of the path. Just to become a sequence 4, he has to raise around 30 trustworthy subordinates. With Klein asleep, I don’t see him pulling it off. The apotheosis ritual is even more insane. And we have had a war already and the remaining gods aren’t too much in disunity so a continent level war seems even more unlikely.

    Ch 29 Method
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    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211yr
    Replied to Moses_0

    Yeah, but I’m also wondering where Audrey is. How is Mr.fool’s superfan not involved in the plan. Or have they decided after a meeting or something taht Fors is the best mentor.

    Ch 28 Laws
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    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211yr
    Replied to Mistdrop

    I think it might not sonic booms. Rather the whoosh sound. I don’t think a sequence 9 would be able to break the sound barrier.

    Ch 27 Five Changes
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    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211yr
    Replied to lvlZeroGamer

    I think the uncommon pathways might non- blasphemy slate pathways and also non divine pathways. meaning you reach angel at max and not reach god level. Or some kind debilitation. The mixing of pathways sounds interesting but it’s highly likely to turn someone into a monster, also, they would still be part of the 22 wouldn’t they?

    Ch 26 Whistleblowing
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    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211yr
    Replied to Beni_Pasterus

    I think she only mentioned one sequence 0 - red priest. And as for how she knew bout the hunter, it’ possibly through Lucian’s description and divination.

    Ch 25 Sequences and Potions
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    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211yr
    Replied to Black_Coffin

    Yeah. especially when he saw Klein. Even high sequence fate path beyonders didn’ want to see Klein.

    It has incredibly strong tracking abilities, and I can't discount the possibility that it possesses some sort of superpowers, much like Aurore…
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    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211yr
    Replied to Purple_lily

    But I think aurore is likely sequence 9 or 8. we don’t know her pathway, so we can’t make guesses on her knowledge of acting method. But I’ glad they finally brought up Beyonder.

    Ch 21 Response
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    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211yr
    Commented

    I’m still not sure on how aurore is a transmigrator. Is she was, wouldn’t she have ties to sefirah castle ?

    Ch 7 Naroka
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    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211yr
    Replied to Blazing_Danitz

    I’m confused how a new path could exist. Don’t all paths originate from the original creator ? And since he awakened on earth, shouldn’t he have possessed all the paths ?

    Ch 5 Card
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    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211yr
    Commented

    Is this the western continent. The parts blocked off by fog. It makes sense if this is this was formerly France

    She wore a snug white pleated cashmere dress with a small off-white coat and a pair of Marseillan boots. There were two tiny silver bells fastened to her veil and boots. They jingled as she walked into the tavern, drawing the attention of many—especially the men.
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    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211yr
    Commented

    What ? I thought John would help cure the MC. Since even he can’t do it, is the Mc doomed to be a demon that hungers after magical energy ?

    Ch 73 Chapter 73: Behind The Scenes
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    The Novel's Professor
    Fantasy · Deathilim_609
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