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Anita_June16dCommentedCh 292 Chapter 46- Talia – Going Home Part 4 Volume 3- Anita_June25dPosted
Story wasn’t bad but chapters were duplicated and out of sync. Would have love to know what made the ML the way he was. The FL’s story/back story was also a bit confusing . You’d give us details that seemed important but then went no where with them. For example: you showed that her dog got saved but yet there was no reveal of that and she continued to believe it was dead and continued blaming the ML for it. It’s like you tried to put in details to make it more interesting but they weren’t relevant and didn’t fit into the story. Also the ending felt rushed and thrown together. But I am happy to see that at least it did have an ending. Keep working, you’ll only get better. Thank you for the story.
- Anita_June3mthCommentedCh 23 CHAPTER TWENTY-THREE – Who she really is
- Anita_June6mthCommented
Lisa also liked the taste of Artem’s blood. I wonder if they drank the blood of the wolves they killed and that’s why they smelled so foul.
The cut on my head had to have been the worst of them, it had bled a lot. The sticky blood that had trailed down my cheek to my neck had been caused by the gash from the ground during the roll. It had also been the place that Uncle Howard had placed his tongue against me and licked a trail up my cheek. He had seemed to enjoy the blood and had even stuck his tongue deep into the wound. Just remembering that made me want to shudder and gag. - Anita_June6mthCommented
Down boy down…lol.
Was that a chorus of angels singing just now? Did I just have every dream come true, every birthday wish granted, and every prayer answered all at the same time? It felt like it. - Anita_June6mthCommented
Ok! I’m thinking that maybe when she changed back Howie saw a distinct mark that showed what/who she is meant to be in the future. That being the Luna Queen. Think about it. She’s mates to an Alpha, but even before she’s 18 her Luna powers are manifesting…that is why so many are starting to find their mates right now. It’s not just coincidence.
Ch 43 Artem - Dealing With The Trash Part 2 - Anita_June6mthReplied to AmandaLynne92
Maybe…it sounds plausible.
We walked silently as we made our way toward where Kent had secured our prisoner. With every step I took that brought me closer to that piece of trash I felt my nose wrinkle a little more. Her scent was so strong and so putrid that I honestly couldn't believe it. What the hell was wrong with those people? The only added benefit was that I could tell when they were near. - Anita_June6mthReplied to Emzl
Yes it is!
Kent was a funny guy. He used jokes in a variety of situations. When he was in a good mood, when he was in a bad mood, when he felt vulnerable. They were his go to thing. He would crack a joke and make others smile so that they were happy like him or to hide what it was he was actually feeling. They were both his weapon and his shield. Sometimes it made it hard to know what Kent was really thinking, but I like to think I know him well enough that I could see through his mechanisms. - Anita_June6mthReplied to manekineko1978
I’m really starting to wonder is there is more at work with their whole family and why they smell so bad…hmm…
"I can't believe someone with such a normal name was able to stink up my car like that. Seriously, I might need to burn the damn thing for insurance money if that stench doesn't come out of the trunk." I chuckled again.