Review Detail of Anita_June in The Demonic CEO in My Bed

Story wasn’t bad but chapters were duplicated and out of sync. Would have love to know what made the ML the way he was. The FL’s story/back story was also a bit confusing . You’d give us details that seemed important but then went no where with them. For example: you showed that her dog got saved but yet there was no reveal of that and she continued to believe it was dead and continued blaming the ML for it. It’s like you tried to put in details to make it more interesting but they weren’t relevant and didn’t fit into the story. Also the ending felt rushed and thrown together. But I am happy to see that at least it did have an ending. Keep working, you’ll only get better. Thank you for the story.