i hope the name actually changes, like 'shang exclaimed' instead of 'alex exclaimed' while everyone else is still calling him shang

i liked this

saving those 436 lives was worth picking up 436 hundred thousand pieces of trash in terms of contribution

if he throws a handful of sand will every grain hit what he aims at

alcohol

...synopsis* (╯°□°）╯︵ ┻━┻

pospered* prospered* aaaaaaaa i miss editing comments

the novels summary says posper instead of prosper, so i'm leaving a comment on the off chance that gets fixed

are these intelligent dungeon monsters secretly plotting to kill the mc? i can only hope

silken locks. i am waiting for a chapter explaining the smoothness of her skin and comparing her teeth to jade

i hope he doesn't act weird as heck around women in the immediate future

i just wanted him to beat up monsters

if he doesn't have 5060 proficiency by this point in the story later i think i will stare at something and go 'oh. darn'

Reviews are actually really annoying because it clearly told me 2.5 stars (2.6, actually) but now it says 2 stars. I give up. At the time of posting it it's just saying 2 stars for me. I hate this.

At first, it was cool and I had some fun with it. I got sucked in and ended up reading up to chapter 88 in one sitting. It slowly felt like things were becoming more messy overtime. Every time the MC would meet a girl I feel like his personality would change. By chapter 88 he is saying things like 'Damn girl!' and calling his summons 'little boys'. There were also things like there being 15000 screened people and apparently all but 12 betrayed humanity. I wont say it's horrible, but it definitely developed into what I'd call a junk food novel. I deleted and reposted my review twice, once for scoring issues and once because I forgot to spoiler tag it, I am not good with the review system.

mc is starting to creep me out, every time a girl appears it just gets weird. why does a girl appearing make him call his summons little boys

i just don't like the idea that the wine immortal is serving food to help people breakthrough instead of wine right now

this was a really long chapter 1 i hope the rest of it isn't like this

Yeah, it was from PC. I tried to segment it just by pressing enter and both just spamming actual spaces. It just doesn't want to work so I'm going to leave it as a mess.

I was trying to add spaces into it so it wasn't just mashed together text so I deleted the original one and re-wrote it after I calmed down. No idea how everyone else actually space out their paragraphs.