He is still thinking like a muggle. He just buried their limbs instead of giving them some sort of drug/poison that would keep them unconscious. even without their limbs they still have access to their supernatural energy/magic.

+1

tanned and smooth as a newborn? What kind of baby did you see that has tanned skin?

Why is everybody and their mother is trying to create human body enhancer? Yes, I get that it is a very popular subject in Marvel but don't they have any other projects to work on?

It should be chugging the beer. Not bear. I don't think Alzack has the arm strength to chug a bear.

Just finished the 11. chapter. Currently I have only 2 problems. The first is of course, the grammar and some wrong words here and there. The second is how obsessed he sounds with his past life bodybuilding activity. I mean, it looks like the author is trying too hard to make his past life relevant but its not working. Even as a kid, Luffy's just normal-not-trained-at-all physique would be superior to peak human of our real world. I guess it sounds like trying to use past life knowledge to gain some kind of advantage but it just sounds like author is trying too hard at this point.

who is the guy on the gif?

present +1

technology level is a bit inconsistent. One second he takes a SHOWER and the next he goes to a nearby river to take a bath.

Isn't he already 5 years old in this chapter? Why keep calling him baby?

get off your high horse. by count your mc had already killed hundreds of people even if they were hydra people.you don't have trouble with killing hundreds or thousands of people but you draw the line on mind control to feel morally wrong? For all their advanced tech level wakanda is extremely primitive while thinking themselves as advanced and feel arrogant. they need a serious beating from society.

I'm not going to say I didn't like this chapter but the character development arc came out of nowhere and this was too much of a serious moment for this fic. It's not bad but it doesn't have anything with your usual writing style. Were you trying to experiment?