Review Detail of SleepyGuy12 in 000X000

Just finished the 11. chapter. Currently I have only 2 problems. The first is of course, the grammar and some wrong words here and there. The second is how obsessed he sounds with his past life bodybuilding activity. I mean, it looks like the author is trying too hard to make his past life relevant but its not working. Even as a kid, Luffy's just normal-not-trained-at-all physique would be superior to peak human of our real world. I guess it sounds like trying to use past life knowledge to gain some kind of advantage but it just sounds like author is trying too hard at this point.