Review Detail of Darius_Chromwell in DXD: The Awakening Of Phenex

Honestly the story started out fine. I like the villain with a plot changing system type of story, but there are so many plot holes and inconsistencies especially in the later chapters I had to give up on reading it before making it to chapter 50. I think it’s a great first draft for a story but the author should probably use it as just that. I would love to see it rewritten and have those plot holes filled.