I don't get it ugh I just want to read without interruption. Now I try to go to his patreon and it's showing up 404 so even if want to read the dang chapter I can't.

repeat please fix

Lo e the story but is it ever going to get an update?

Glad for the chapter but it felt really rushed and not how do I say relevant I mean it can be a side chapter and all but it seemed rather pointless. Interesting though that he can't go anywhere besides young justice worlds yet

Man so funny I like the side stories and things.But I wish the chapters was faster coming ugh waiting a day for such a good story is to long.Keep it up though great work.

yes

women, guys, and futas cause I'm sure mha has some that was cause by a quirk or something you can even add a tentacle mutant quick user to fool with.

OK I get wanting to be a saiyan in the DBZ universe. it's just I was looking forward to a human story I mean you gave him that system already and the potential skill. That should been enough you could of had him wish the best trainer knowledge in the universe or something like that. It's just ashame you had to make him wish to be a saiyan.

Man everyone went straight for the big named ones. I personally think it should be Jewelry Bonney if you going for a woman from the series if not then go OC cause all the others are done to much.

if harem at most 3-5 so it can develope easier and if not just Cana all the way.

come on you could of let it go on hiatus for a bit with explaing then come back when you have inspiration. Sorry you got covid though hope you get better.

I love these Pet Avengers chapters they are great!!!

Are you going to do anything with the M-Day material or anything like that?

OK I think it would be a nice curve ball if his third character is Starfire. I mean come on let him feel like what a woman feels but don't take it to far like sexual or anything just emotions and stuff. Also he could get some cravings for Starfires weird homeworld food. Plus I think Nightwing is to plain for him right now I mean don't get me wrong Nightwing is cool great abilities and good if you want to take him in a smart guy detective route. I also think Gilgamesh would be to powerful right now maybe 2 or 3 more character down the road same for Madera as Gilgamesh he would be to powerful for him right now it would leave no growth potential.

why did you make Goku introduce himself as Kakarot

You should have released two chapter this one was to short. Good job though I enjoyed it.

love the work so far and it's called Solar Flare not flash bomb but hey its all good great job.

I wouldn't add N to the camp his character was sheltered his whole life I would keep it that way. I get changing something's cause it's a fan fiction but some should be left the same to keep some plot.

So good I need more keep up the great work.

love it keep it up and maybe publish a little faster but you do you and I like how he had to work for magic. I'm not to sure about super early trunks but I get it it's already and AU with Lux there so keep it going real good so far.