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Leonholdt

Leonholdt

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2018-04-16 JoinedGlobal
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  • Leonholdt
    Leonholdt2mth
    Commented

    it is a pity that the author doesn't appear to even bother to attempt and keep notes so that they can keep the story somewhat accurate based on previous chapters. good for a free read, not worth spending for, though

    "It's a challenging situation," Dick acknowledged silently. Despite his F+ level strength, the Goblin Slayer, a black Steal level adventurer, was equivalent to a D-level monster, a force not to be underestimated.
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    Reborn As a Goblin With Simulation System
    Fantasy · Rqmk
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  • Leonholdt
    Leonholdt5mth
    Commented

    This author has a disturbing habit of using "filling" chapters to show what useless background idiots online say without actually progressing the story. it's relatively sad.

    Ch 27 Chapter 27: I underestimated, I didn't dodge...
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    Deities: Starting From Goblins
    Games · Gray Ashes
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  • Leonholdt
    Leonholdt5mth
    Posted

    will change it and give an actual proper review when it can be unlocked and read

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  • Leonholdt
    Leonholdt6mth
    Posted

    Admittedly, im about 60 chapters or so in. while some improvement was made as it went, I can't justify a higher rating at this time. almost every conversation or thought process, the MC has feels like the vomited words of a crack addict that can not string to thoughts together, and it makes it difficult to follow the story. ill update this in a few weeks when I can justify to myself coming back to read more.overall, the story has potential, but things are hardly fleshed out or feel incredibly forced with no rhyme or reason. I'd love to see it edited and fixed to actually give it a proper review, but I doubt that will happen

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    Goddess Wives x Eternal Dungeon
    Urban · Lunatic_Pandora
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  • Leonholdt
    Leonholdt1yr
    Commented

    Reading the next sentences. it sounds like the tail never actually hit him. Rewording this to "The tail lashed out at him , forcing him to stop and dodge" would make a lot more sense

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    Apocalypse: System of lotteries
    Urban · FETI
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  • Leonholdt
    Leonholdt1yr
    Commented

    Jesus, the author is a moron for the use of present, past and future tense and the mtl a foolish adullesant for not correcting it and expecting to be paid

    The more mana the embryo absorbs, the stronger its aura has become. At the end, when the embryo finishes absorbing as much mana as it could, it flew down and Rezen reached his palm out
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    My Farm System: Reaching The Top In The Parallel Earth!
    Fantasy · KenceRussel
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  • Leonholdt
    Leonholdt1yr
    Posted

    absolute garbage. it doesn't deserve a proper review. The MTL expects to be paid for such shoddy work.................... ..... .....

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    When Doomsday Comes, I Can Upgrade My Refuge Infinitely
    Fantasy · Xuanting_Official
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  • Leonholdt
    Leonholdt1yr
    Commented

    yeah...learn to edit. A crater can't hit anything. it's a result, not an action

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    When Doomsday Comes, I Can Upgrade My Refuge Infinitely
    Fantasy · Xuanting_Official
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  • Leonholdt
    Leonholdt1yr
    Posted

    I would honestly give this a better rating if the translator took the time to properly edit at least the names and genders of the characters. I won't even go into the sheer amount of continuity issues, pretty common for translated novels to have them. I assume it's all written by 10 year Olds. the story itself is kind of interesting, a mix-mash of multiple sub-generes that actually do work well together. story progress is rushed, like normal. characters are two dimensional cookie cutter copy pasted types. no soul, or connectivity to them. world background would be better if it wasn't so stale. the author tries to switch perspectives to give it a background, but just turns it into the MC some how knowing about it all anyway updated regularly at least The quality of the MTL is utter trash in chapters around 100 and on. a few decent ones, but not many. Shit editing there. but it happens.

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    Lord Of The People: I Recruited A Mutant Succubus From The Start
    Sci-fi · Long Qingwen
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  • Leonholdt
    Leonholdt1yr
    Posted

    very poor writing/mtl editing. cookie cutter with a take on summoning. worth a passing skim or a read. trying to go further will hurt your brain.......................................................

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    Beast Taming by the World: I Synthesize While Others Upgrading
    Fantasy · Xuanting_Official
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  • Leonholdt
    Leonholdt2yr
    Posted

    Will change it when somethings actually posted to read. I'll never truly understand the point of posting something and leaving it empty. . .

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    Global Lords: Hundredfold Increments Starting With the Undead
    Games · Angry Piranha
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  • Leonholdt
    Leonholdt2yr
    Commented

    'God of Smithing' Smithy would be where he forges. Smithery isn't even really a word

    [Host has found Val Volundr, the being known as the 'God of Smithery']
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    [(Error Unknown) System]
    Fantasy · PhantomMedjay
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  • Leonholdt
    Leonholdt2yr
    Commented

    this entire paragraph, among many others was obviously not edited. he was heartbroken to see his daughter growing so fast. Already she was choosing a random little boy over her father.

    A heartbroken that his daughter was growing so far, Val couldn't help but tease his child a little and her new friend.
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    [(Error Unknown) System]
    Fantasy · PhantomMedjay
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  • Leonholdt
    Leonholdt2yr
    Posted

    If the translator took the time to actually edit and proof read it I'd increase my review points. it is also a cookie cutter fiction with no actual point so my own judgment is its worth a single read then drop once they start making you pay

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    Beast Armorer: Infinite Evolution
    Eastern · Eternal Dream
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  • Leonholdt
    Leonholdt2yr
    Commented

    this is slowly becoming redundant. the translator never seems to actually edit these things and the author repeats knowledge every single chapter for no reason other than to fill put the word count. this is done poorly as well, with no actual progress being made in a story that has 500 chapters at this time

    Ch 115 Rich Battle Returns
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    Lord of the Oasis
    Games · Ji Mansion's Old Zhao
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  • Leonholdt
    Leonholdt2yr
    Commented

    that entire paragraph hurt my eyes.

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    My Magical System
    Fantasy · Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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  • Leonholdt
    Leonholdt2yr
    Posted

    understandably, this fiction has a fairly interesting start with a non human protagonist. the down side is that the author, yes im sure they don't speak English as a primary language and have adjusted to that, but there is no noticeable improvement or effort to improve the multitude of glaring vocabulary mistakes the characters have no real "meat" to them, no substance or relatability. they are very one deminsional with little growth - to me at least. the story is a cookie cutter bit with a slight twist with the system. You can ignore similarities or the boring monotony thanks to that twist. Author does update steadily. the world itself doesn't appear horribly built - have not Ben able to read much past 50. it started hurting my brain. as a whole, the fiction is one you'd likely read once and waste time with. at least the free chapters. having read at least half of the available chapters - at this time - I can say it isn't worth reading past the premium status. no actual improvement is done in the authors writing and it isn't worth spending cash on.

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    CONQEROR
    Fantasy · BLACKangelmarl
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  • Leonholdt
    Leonholdt3yr
    Posted

    there is no real consistancy with the story. 7 days into the apocolypze and people are this stage 4 thing while having knowledge only the MC, a returner, should have. im not sure if this is the authors failed attempt at forced progression or poor though patterns. while id recommend it for bored reading, I would never spend stones or coins on it. it simply isn't worth that.

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    Doomsday Online: Supreme Blessing
    Urban · Jixia Academy's Half-Step Gentleman
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