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Review Detail of Leonholdt in Lord Of The People: I Recruited A Mutant Succubus From The Start

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I would honestly give this a better rating if the translator took the time to properly edit at least the names and genders of the characters. I won't even go into the sheer amount of continuity issues, pretty common for translated novels to have them. I assume it's all written by 10 year Olds. the story itself is kind of interesting, a mix-mash of multiple sub-generes that actually do work well together. story progress is rushed, like normal. characters are two dimensional cookie cutter copy pasted types. no soul, or connectivity to them. world background would be better if it wasn't so stale. the author tries to switch perspectives to give it a background, but just turns it into the MC some how knowing about it all anyway updated regularly at least The quality of the MTL is utter trash in chapters around 100 and on. a few decent ones, but not many. Shit editing there. but it happens.

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Lord Of The People: I Recruited A Mutant Succubus From The Start

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