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Let's be real now. Noah is an error, a bug in Heaven and Earth's system. He's a self replicating virus that infects everything he touches and turns them into errors too. Considering the fact that it has been implied that the reason behind Noah's reincarnation is because Heaven and Earth are weakening and losing part of their control because they are an existence that failed to find a complete path, they are missing something that they lack. Who's to say that our favorite Patriarch is actually dead? Maybe Noah has made enough of an impact on his specific plane to cause Heaven and Earth more trouble controlling that particular part of the reincarnation system? He could be reincarnated just like Noah was. It follows the plot perfectly.
There's always another Drake.
WHY DOES IT HAVE TO BE SNAKES!?
Dead Meat because his father will never allow him to live~
you should have left it outside and buried it. If they search you and find it then you won't get a simple punishment, imbecile.
30 years old and trying to bully a child.
Yes, you must be speaking from experience Mr. transmigrator.
"You're very forward aren't you, talking about how good your tongue is." Song Shuhang said as he lowered his gaze to her lips and then met her eyes again.
If you can't speak or write in English, don't try to publish a novel in it.
Ninja? Is that you?
I wanted to ask, are the rest of the characters going put up such a farce like the father when the little girl died in chapter two? I don't know if I can stomach so much stupidity, so if your quality of writing hasn't improved since chapter 2, please don't make me waste my time by finding out the hard way.
One step at a time, don't worry, I'm sure the author won't neglect your plot armor for long.
Exactly, I don't like the way this is being written. I care about the little sister princess, I like her character. Every time something happens, it breaks the immersion and reminds me that this character that I like isn't real and their relationship is pointless, which therefore makes my emotional investment also pointless, and with that pointlessness goes my desire to continue reading.
From this I'm really not interested in reading the novel anymore. The main character clearly planned for this event to kill his brother off, regardless of how much the author wants to try and write it off as a 'bonus' or a 'coincidence' all of the readers can blatantly tell that this was done purposefully. I mean, as far as purposefully killing off characters go, that's one thing, but when you go so far as to purposefully kill off a relative of the main character with the supposedly 'honorable' main characters own hand, and then try to write it out in such a way that allows the main character to come out clean 'morally', I really just can't. You can take a pragmatic view of the story and step back and view it from the fact that this is just one of his simulations, but that just ruins the rest of what little enjoyment I got out of the novel to begin with. I like the little sister princess, I like their relationship. Drawing attention to the fact that they aren't real does not make me, as a reader, happy. It's strange to complain about realness in a novel. Essentially this is a story about a story. The story inside the story isn't real inside the original story and that doesn't work for me. It breaks immersion.