''technically disease is Murder by Mother Nature'' you are really using that technically strongly here, Murder, by definition: the unlawful premeditated killing of one human being by another. This trait could be worded better yes, but more then likely this had more to do with diffrences in language then anything

i mean the author prob has a skewed point of wiev when comparing homelander to superman, superman is a nigh imortal god without his weakness to kryptonite and magic lol, and when seeing comparisons to homlander the author might have been a bit confused, and forgot that homlander is just a really cheap knock off of superman

the short of this review: very good translation and good story. this is a great translation, honestly i'd never have guessed it was translated if not stated by the translator I can see no akward phrases or conversations. its a great fan fiction Not to mention the story is really fun and even somone who has no knowledge of leauge of legends or any of its spin offs can enjoy it. It takes some enjoyment away not knowing the champions but honestly not much and this is comming from someone who hasent played leauge in 7 years.

I can fix her!

I understand, but you need to realize that the synopsis is where the reader decides if he or she wants to read the story you write, and showing indifference is bad, no matter the reason. If you aren't good at synopses, get better. It's here you should show why the reader should be interested. You are selling your story, and when I see 'I don't care,' first impressions are important, and this is a wrong one. and if you are spending ''hours'' writing this story why cant you spend 10 minuttes introdoucing your fanfic. right? when you say im spending hours on this story and ofcourse i care, but your unwilling to spend a bit of extra time making sure your synopsis is good? you see where the logic fails? anyway good luck on writing

Rest up, Expert Sleeper. I'll let you dream about my apparent wrongness. Enjoy your beauty sleep.

Got it, Professor Clarity. Steering clear of 'stupid decisions' is the mission. Wouldn't want to complicate things in this non-conflict we're absolutely not having, right

yes, but i'ts still the goverments job to decide things like that. Lets play with the idea they killed the worst criminals, do you understand how much humans fear even random things. Now imagine superpwoered heroes going around killing someone they decide are dangerous, what would normal people think? majority would fear them creating a massive rift in the poulation that could evantually lead to civil war. Evrything wrong with the state of crimals and heroes is the fault of the system

Well, blending in and playing it safe is an art, I suppose. Takes a special skill not everyone possesses. Kudos to you for championing the 'not being dumb' cause. Must be a real trailblazer in the world of normalcy.

Meh. Who needs genius when you've got a great sense of humor? I'll take a good laugh over a Mensa membership any day

seems like you need to stop reading fanfics and start actually go out because if you belive a perfect mc who can do no wrong would is a good story you need jesus

i't might be a good story but if the first thing i read is ''I don't care'' then why should I? its just like, dude... i'ts a huge turnoff

I couldent care so i asked chat gtp: Title: "A Mundane Odyssey" Review: In the perplexing realm of literary endeavors, there are instances when an author's indifference towards their own creation becomes glaringly evident. Such is the case with "[Your Novel's Title]," where the synopsis itself is a testament to the author's nonchalant approach. The protagonist, Ishiro Yamanaka, is unceremoniously thrust into a world that seems to lack the imaginative spark needed to captivate readers. The description reeks of a lackadaisical attitude, as if the author begrudgingly threw together a mishmash of worn-out tropes without a care for originality or ingenuity. The promise of a "captivating tale of adventure and resilience" falls flat when the author openly acknowledges borrowing heavily from other, presumably superior, stories. It's almost as if they are waving a white flag, admitting that their work is a mere collage of elements borrowed from more accomplished works, devoid of the creative energy required to make it stand on its own. The audacious statement that the author "couldn't care about a synopsis" is a bold declaration of apathy. It raises the question of why readers should invest their time and attention in a story that the creator himself appears disinterested in promoting. If the person behind the narrative doesn't care about presenting a compelling and enticing premise, why should potential readers care about delving into the lackluster world of Ishiro Yamanaka? While seeking feedback is a commendable endeavor, the author's nonchalant attitude towards their own work is a glaring issue. Writing is an art form that demands passion, dedication, and a genuine desire to connect with the audience. Without these elements, "[Your Novel's Title]" risks being dismissed as a forgettable endeavor, lost in the vast sea of literature where indifference is the quickest route to obscurity.

no ofcourse not, those are on fridays.

i mean... to be fair, you cant really compare war and regular criminals. I agree i'ts hipocritical but then again, find me a singe human that isen't and ill be impressed

I cant stand that attitude... just watch 2 seasons of a tv show THEN it gets good. fuck no, if it's not good from the get go im not gonna bother

ya, i'ts funny once in a while, but you started using it too much and wrong. The point of it is to describe or show an expression, you used it too express feelings and thoughts. Thats not how you use it, it completely ruined the immersion of the actual story.

the fact that the original blackbeard had ''2 souls'' is one of the main theories on why blackbeard can have 2 devil fruits, that and 2 hearts and now with our main character taking over the body, he has 3 souls

it's an okay fanfic, i was a fun read untll the constant us of emoticons like this (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ inside the sentence structure. its truly annoying stop it.