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Review Detail of AlphaHost in Reborn In The Third Shinobi War, With Hacks (Naruto Fanfiction)

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I couldent care so i asked chat gtp: Title: "A Mundane Odyssey" Review: In the perplexing realm of literary endeavors, there are instances when an author's indifference towards their own creation becomes glaringly evident. Such is the case with "[Your Novel's Title]," where the synopsis itself is a testament to the author's nonchalant approach. The protagonist, Ishiro Yamanaka, is unceremoniously thrust into a world that seems to lack the imaginative spark needed to captivate readers. The description reeks of a lackadaisical attitude, as if the author begrudgingly threw together a mishmash of worn-out tropes without a care for originality or ingenuity. The promise of a "captivating tale of adventure and resilience" falls flat when the author openly acknowledges borrowing heavily from other, presumably superior, stories. It's almost as if they are waving a white flag, admitting that their work is a mere collage of elements borrowed from more accomplished works, devoid of the creative energy required to make it stand on its own. The audacious statement that the author "couldn't care about a synopsis" is a bold declaration of apathy. It raises the question of why readers should invest their time and attention in a story that the creator himself appears disinterested in promoting. If the person behind the narrative doesn't care about presenting a compelling and enticing premise, why should potential readers care about delving into the lackluster world of Ishiro Yamanaka? While seeking feedback is a commendable endeavor, the author's nonchalant attitude towards their own work is a glaring issue. Writing is an art form that demands passion, dedication, and a genuine desire to connect with the audience. Without these elements, "[Your Novel's Title]" risks being dismissed as a forgettable endeavor, lost in the vast sea of literature where indifference is the quickest route to obscurity.

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Reborn In The Third Shinobi War, With Hacks (Naruto Fanfiction)

Evil_Monologue

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Evil_Monologue
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thanks for the feedback m8

AlphaHost
AlphaHostLv5AlphaHost

i't might be a good story but if the first thing i read is ''I don't care'' then why should I? its just like, dude... i'ts a huge turnoff

Evil_Monologue:thanks for the feedback m8
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Evil_Monologue
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yeah. I get that, but when I wrote 'i don't care for writing a synopsis' i meant mostly that. Not that i don't care for the story I'm putting hours and hours into...Anyway

AlphaHost
AlphaHostLv5AlphaHost

I understand, but you need to realize that the synopsis is where the reader decides if he or she wants to read the story you write, and showing indifference is bad, no matter the reason. If you aren't good at synopses, get better. It's here you should show why the reader should be interested. You are selling your story, and when I see 'I don't care,' first impressions are important, and this is a wrong one. and if you are spending ''hours'' writing this story why cant you spend 10 minuttes introdoucing your fanfic. right? when you say im spending hours on this story and ofcourse i care, but your unwilling to spend a bit of extra time making sure your synopsis is good? you see where the logic fails? anyway good luck on writing

Evil_Monologue:yeah. I get that, but when I wrote 'i don't care for writing a synopsis' i meant mostly that. Not that i don't care for the story I'm putting hours and hours into...Anyway
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