shameless author review but pleas check this out if you want to read about an xianxia novel about Irish mythology

this novel had an alright premise but it is completely ruined by the incompetency of the author by making the story seem like it was written by a 5 year old

man the writing style is nauseatingly bad

I think I'll make it that he might do some form of gene Manipulation and use mechs and stuff but he's never going to cultivate and the main focus of the book will be about integrating tech into cultivation world and like growing his company

I liked the start of reverend insanity with the two twins and one being extremely talented In cultivation but My book is going to have a completely different plot and tone from reverend insanity going on and probably the main difference is that Lin Chen won't cultivate at all in the book

So far from what I've read the novel is really good the writing style is clean and the dialogue is clear the first chapter really hooks the reader and keeps them wanting more

Wow so far this novel has been amazing I love the writing style and the world-building has been great so far hopefully the author can be active and update this novel regularly because I need more chapters

The Tale of the Worst One is a great book with amazing world building. The writing style is very easy to follow and the story is very engaging. The world building is very detailed and the reader can easily imagine the different kingdoms. I would definitely recommend this book to anyone who is looking for a great fantasy story. I can't wait for future updates to the novel

An extremely well written start to a book it portrays the tone of the story extremely well and the characters seem very interesting I can't wait for future releases

This is a good start to a promising book it is well written with a good concept hopefully it can develop into a great novel in the future Sometimes some of the phrasing can be a bit awkward but not detrimentally so

an interesting start to a novel with an interesting premice the writing style is good but there is a few grammatical errors that should be fixed

thanks 😁

thanks Mr West

haha best of luck I'm in the same position as you so please feel free to give my novel similarly harsh review

Its a story that could have a lot of promise I just feel that the writing quality could improve as well as the dialogue scenes feeling a bit unnatural Best of luck to the author with the continuation of the story

Shameless author review this is my first ever novel so if you have any criticism or ideas for the story you want to add please let me know all feedback is appreciated.

this story starts OK but my god is the author insufferable in the way he writes he thinks references equal funny and the whole hometown childhood arc was miserably cringe