Its a story that could have a lot of promise I just feel that the writing quality could improve as well as the dialogue scenes feeling a bit unnatural Best of luck to the author with the continuation of the story
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LIKEhaha best of luck I'm in the same position as you so please feel free to give my novel similarly harsh review
Eclipse_Ranger:Thanks for the review. I'm totally new to the writing I hope to improve throughout the book. Please pray for me đ Thanks again