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It's a little coincidental how the mc is a lot like the original Rick Castle in his mannerisms and John has a bit too easy of a time getting over his wife who just a month or two ago but other than that the story is spot on. The delivery is good without sacrificing the funny parts and the broody parts. Good job. [img=recommend]
https://www.mtlnovel.com/arms-dealers-from-hogwarts/chapter-101/
Nevermind, I found it. There's over 300 chapters there. Such a waste to drop
Can you at least tell us the original title
Wow! This is the first time I read an ambitious fanfic that can actually pull it off!! It's 7 chapters and the mc has not been a pathetic beta nor douchebag alpha despite how problematic his situation is. The grammar is surprisingly good as well. Not formal enough to lose any realism and formal enough not to sound like it was mtl'ed. If had to nitpick about a problem, it's how lucky for the mc to get an awesome Gacha right at the start. Despite looking like normal Gacha powers or skills, the items he got are an op starting set. Just with the universal energy conduit and the spear proficiency, he'll op af since it was the same thing Yu Ilhan started with after the thousand years he spent purely honing himself to perfection. (He also trained with subclasses like blacksmithing but his spear proficiency was what made op) And with the universal energy conduit he'll be able to adapt anywhere. It means, wherever he goes, if he can have something like magic he can later create something passive that can defend against that. (Magic resistance) If he can get chakra, he can get something passive that can defend against that. (Truth seeking ball) And since he knows the story of those worlds, he can just directly find a way to get them after all, the most difficult part is knowing a path and be assured it works. It means although there's a calamity, there's a golden path laid out. He just have to humble himself without losing self respect to the members and survive by working hard even though the world is panicking all around him. And if you haven't guessed it by now, I'm loving reading this hahahahaha!!
She doesn't act or react like a guy. Her actions sounds more like a manipulative gf. Even gay guys have this mannerisms in them that tells people that they were once male. Ava, is kind of eerie cause I can't imagine the mc ever being a guy. It's like the author has never experienced being a guy.
It's been 18 chapters and it's doing pretty good. If this was an original fanfic I'd be more enthusiastic but Chinese fanfics have a habit with sudden shit plots that ruins the story. A friend once told me about a Chinese fanfic that he loves for the first 30 chaps until it turned into full on NTR where all his harem got fucked by his friend repeatedly. So yeah, I just wish this keeps getting better and not turning out like that.
This ability was something new to him, something he and the person he transmigrated into never experienced. a realistic simulation of a character's experience. In some parts of it, it was even mentioned that his character experienced something different from the script given to him. For example, when he used it on Rob Stark's character, instead of simulating the tv series portrayal, he experienced the book version. And when he trained in horse riding, his simulation guided him into being an expert rider, something method acting can't do since it's impossible to be an expert on something he never experienced in both lives before.
It's best if Kat meets her original romantic partner. It feels like the mc is stringing him along with his obliviousness. Plus Heath Ledger's portrayal of that character sounds like a guy that can guide the mc into being a more well rounded person. The mc is great but his naivety needs to stop cause the tv series connected to his life is not sunshine and rainbows especially if he wants to get rich. And yeah, House can do that but it's better if it's from someone in his own age who can still have relatively good heart despite the shit that goes on in his life. House can't do that since he's too busy wallowing in his pain, Alex has way too many issues and secrets to actually help. It needs to be someone who'd give it to him straight.
Dude, unless you kill of wednesday's father, it's impossible. Even then it's still far fetched. That's basically the fundamentals of the Addams family. The Addams family are creepy, violent, rich, and to them, nothing is above family. They'd sooner exterminate everyone else than utterly betray family.