Chupa_uva
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a missão "dormir cedo" falhou
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Chupa_uva2mthPosted- Chupa_uva4mthCommentedWhen their paths intersected, their eyes briefly connected, though the moment was fleeting. At this juncture, they remained strangers, unaware of the future connection that awaited them.
- Chupa_uva6mthCommented
Author's know about MMA
But even though Vice had put his Earth combat experience to good use, his body size and weight disadvantage compared to that of his opponents was hard to overcome. So, even he had suffered a little. - Chupa_uva6mthCommentedHis mother, Kate Hogan, basically lived to tend to the needs of her husband and children.
- Chupa_uva7mthCommented
English capitalization rules require that certain words, like proper nouns and the first word in a sentence, start with a capital letter.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Chupa_uva7mthCommentedSeeing An Kai rush into the town, Hanks started to mutter, "I'll go find Widow Wang tonight. Even if I have to use force, I have to take her away!"
- Chupa_uva7mthCommentedCalm down guys, it was centuries ago.
- Chupa_uva8mthCommentedHowever, in the end, she pouted and said, "Qiu'er laughed at me today for having a small mouth. She said that it's not suitable for me to play the flute because of this. Xiao Tao argued with her and said that someone who has a small mouth would be able to blow it better. Then, everyone laughed. I don't know what they were laughing about…"
- Chupa_uva8mthCommentedBut he realized that it was impossible to use any of his modern knowledge without the technology to back it up. As an average person back on Earth, he didn't have a single clue on how to build any of the machines that made modern society thrive.
- Chupa_uva8mthCommentedmiles away from them, several colorful lights illuminated the heavens, as a battle between wizards and witches of two different factions was being waged.
- Chupa_uva8mthCommentedThis bastard lied to Xiao Rongyu again.
- Chupa_uva9mthCommentedSadly, his joy was eclipsed by a dark fate that loomed over him from the shadows.
- Chupa_uva9mthCommented"What the hell was that?"
- Chupa_uva9mthCommented"Pfft!" She chuckled. "You have a funny way with words, Happy"
- Chupa_uva9mthCommentedHappy smirked and fixed his nonexistent glasses with a finger in the middle, "Fuh… I know everyone's birthday. Harry's comes on the thirty-first of July, Ron's comes on the first of March, and yours comes on the nineteenth of September."
- Chupa_uva9mthPosted
So far I found it to be an engaging story. The characters arent't yet well-developed, and the plot isn't unpredictable. But still I really enjoy these type magic-fantasy stories.The protagonist, Dave, is smart and methodical. He knows how to get what he wants.The plot is nothing new but I does it job to keep the reader engaged.The writing is okay and clear. The author didn't really explaining the world of magic and the different types of spells and abilities that exist yet.
- Chupa_uva9mthCommentedFeeling poor, he decided to start his money-making plan quickly.