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Daoist_Large_Slong1dCommentedCh 2 Chapter 2 – Waking Up to Another Day- Daoist_Large_Slong3dPosted
Honest review here around chapter 30. Overall the story is pretty good. However it has its pros and cons. Pros: The MC being raised by bugs is pretty cool as you dont read that often. Characters are well fleshed out. The abilities and different bug types are also well thought. Harem development is pretty solid. Ngl in the beginning i was thinking this story was too good.. until like most novels on here the bad will eventually show up Cons: The MC unfortunately retains a somewhat pathetic human mindset. On one hand he supports the hive.. then on the other he forces them to spare civilians and animals. Downright stupid tbh. And this is after 16 years of watching them “murder” other civilizations. These hives are literally decimating women, children and whole races.. and yet this dude wants to play hero in random moments. This is the biggest stain on this novel for me personally and killed the vibes. While not so infuriating is another minor annoyance of the MC refraining from full on sex with the queen and others for as long as he has. Im just gonna assume bro is a virgin. It doesnt matter what “excuses” he comes up with. It just screams virgin male.
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Noooooo… just when i thought i found a top read.. you had to go and make the MC a puss puss ☠️
With that the Ker'mins went on their way, not without a few of the females taking glances before doing so, once they were out of earshot Orchid turned to me in confusion. "Why did you let them go love?" expecting the question from Orchid I responded "They were civilians Orchid. That may mean nothing to you and the hive, which I'm fine with I've always said I would never try to change your way of doing, but to me they were no threat they were innocent. I may be ok in taking a soldiers life as it is their duty but the civilians just now, all they wanted was to survive. I could not in good conscious take that from them." - Daoist_Large_Slong3dCommented
Hope he doesnt honor everything he kills in the future..
I mulled over her answer for a second before replying "Its fine, the creature would have been killed anyway by the conquest I'm just glad I was the one who killed in so I can honour her when we get home, anyway enough feeling sorry for myself lets press on towards the Ker'mins, I don't like the sound of those barrages so close." - Daoist_Large_Slong3dCommented
Stupid reasoning tbh. That said, i still enjoy the story.
Being a hypocrite, I grabbed Orchids currently combat plated covered posterior and said "while I am defiantly on board with being your 'mate' now, you have to control yourself I may be old enough now but I am still fully open to using the stick if you get out of line." Orchid looked downtrodden at that comment so to cheer her up i continued. "That being said, an old saying about us humans how fighting gets us all hot and bothered after the fact so who knows, after the fight I may get horny and have no chance but to have my way with you." - Daoist_Large_Slong6dCommentedCh 78 she's relentless
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Seriously lol. Tired of these lame MCs
Barry is not a bright child even though he likes reading. He only reads fiction and most of what he reads are web novels. So his knowledge of basic knowledge is not very good. - Daoist_Large_Slong8dReplied to JBFIRE_77
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- Daoist_Large_Slong12dCommentedCh 55 A hint of cunning flashed in her eyes
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- Daoist_Large_Slong23dCommented
MC just had an idiot moment
"I know, but I don't want to cause trouble for Margaret's parents and the people in the village in the future," Arthur explains, but Alicia insists. "If you're apprehensive about this scum's family coming to look for trouble, we can simply go to Lakeview and show them their place; rats should not rise against lions." - Daoist_Large_Slong23dCommented
Its called being a little simp. Arthurs skill
"Oh, you care about her honor and purity?" Draven respects Arthur even more for that. "You keep surpassing me in every way. I couldn't have resisted the advances of a girl like that at your age." - Daoist_Large_Slong23dCommented
I hope he learns a harsh lesson from letting them go.
The two pick up the third member of the trio and run as fast as they can without looking back. - Daoist_Large_Slong23dCommented
Oh the skilled killer needs the advice of a shy astral beast.. please. We need liam to take over. Stupid.
"You have to act now while they're confident," she says in his mind. "They're drunk, so if you're quick, you can save the girl from any harm..." - Daoist_Large_Slong23dCommented
My thoughts too
"So what's the problem then?" She asks, impatient and dejected. "I don't see you looking at any other girl... maybe you like... men?" - Daoist_Large_Slong23dPosted
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