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MartyUrsus5mthCommentedHis eyes where reddish amber not brown
They saw a man wearing a vibrant red robe with a loose, flowing design. His long hair cascaded down his shoulders, framing the face. He looked gentle and aggressive at the same time, with a Scandinavian-Slavic appearance: sharp, chopped features and an aggressive look. His dark brown eyes seem to stare straight into the soul…- MartyUrsus1yrCommented
In the next chapter He goes Into Detail on how people don’t use keyboards anymore.
Colt carried his belongings through the offices towards the elevator. With each step, he could hear the clacking of keyboards as people were busy going about their jobs. 'I'm really going to miss this.' He sighed dejectedly. - MartyUrsus1yrReplied to Kratos_theLycaon
Those are a good contender
Smiling he moved on to the High Human Potion, it was a swirling blue potion that seemed to alternate between different blues from lighter to darker shade ones. Opening the lid he took a sniff, it smelled like blue raspberry jolly ranchers, licking his lips he hesitated a moment before drinking it whole while closing his eyes tight right after. - MartyUrsus1yrCommented
Its getting annoying with the physical abuse
"Oh right. I'm Fukushima Tobias, but you can call me Tobias, Tenya-kun." said Tobias before being elbowed by Kyoka. - MartyUrsus1yrCommented
I turned on paragraph comments to say this exact thing. TY
Right as Tobias was going to open his mouth to say something, Kyoka buzzed him before glaring at him. - MartyUrsus1yrReplied to Berserk_Asura
Nah I’d rather be erased from existence then be a slave to some cockroache god.
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- MartyUrsus1yrCommented
This paragraph needs work. The ROB is speaking to the Mc so he does not need to say ”his “ it should be your also the Mc is a male so make sure the pronouns are correct
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And this is we’r I hop off was fun while it lasted.
Me: What are the chances that i build a computer that has realistic graphics like what's shown in Unreal Engine 5, has high ass rendering, has a cool ass cooling system, loads and loads of space where you can download hot lesbian hentai in, and has a cool A.I in them? - MartyUrsus2yrCommented
I hope you do well with this. Most systems that have personality’s are not done well so heres to hoping it turns out well.
Me💭:So system, i have a thought... I don't want to call you System anymore. I want to call you Alice. Is that okay with you? - MartyUrsus2yrCommented
Is he going to be a wash cloth mc?
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There is no tag for it on the about page soooooo.
But why? Why me, and what is this new world? It looks modern and similar to my old world, so I'm not in an isekai fantasy harem unfortunately. - MartyUrsus2yrCommented
Is this a gender bender?
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A lot of use of the word I breaks immersion.
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Is he going to try to make it onetho? If so please let us know in the beginning so I can dip.
But why? Why me, and what is this new world? It looks modern and similar to my old world, so I'm not in an isekai fantasy harem unfortunately. - MartyUrsus2yrCommented
Dude get her away from him please.
Quickly turning he looked to his window, at the moment someone was lifting it up and sneaking inside, he raised a brow after seeing the face, "Allison, why are you sneaking into my window at eleven at night? Shouldn't you be asleep at home?" - MartyUrsus2yrCommented
They are the best flavor jolly ranchers
Smiling he moved on to the High Human Potion, it was a swirling blue potion that seemed to alternate between different blues from lighter to darker shade ones. Opening the lid he took a sniff, it smelled like blue raspberry jolly ranchers, licking his lips he hesitated a moment before drinking it whole while closing his eyes tight right after.