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dwaram31

dwaram31

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Avid reader of isekai novels.

2017-12-09 JoinedIndonesia
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  • dwaram31
    dwaram319mth
    Commented

    Nice and fresh joke there

    This class is as useless as a hedgehog in a condom factory.
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    Reincarnated with the Mind Control Powers in Another World.
    Fantasy · Night_phantom
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  • dwaram31
    dwaram319mth
    Commented

    TMI

    Yang: Thanks, and that saves me a trip to buy the mana potions I guess so again thanks for that. I'm surprised there was enough money for that but I guess you made it work huh. I'm gonna go ahead and check my stats with Hephaestus before I go get dinner. Heading off into the dungeon tomorrow so I might be gone for a bit. I'll try to get materials from hellhounds if I get that far because I feel like I'm gonna need it for more armor. I'll see ya around Sarran.
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    Elementalist in a dungeon(Danmachi fanfiction)
    Anime & Comics · keanu_eugene
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  • dwaram31
    dwaram319mth
    Commented

    What kind of stupid logic is that? There are so many strong adventurers in Orario. Not everyone is weak like stupid beginner he was with

    Yang: "Hmm thanks for the heads up I'll make sure to read this" Taking the small booklet he can't help but think 'I can't afford to have a team, I couldn't do anything when my last one died and I don't think a new one could keep up anyway'
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    Elementalist in a dungeon(Danmachi fanfiction)
    Anime & Comics · keanu_eugene
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  • dwaram31
    dwaram319mth
    Commented

    That really really escalate quickly isn't it. No wonder the fanfic ends in 200ish chapter. Hopefully it'll be a good ride

    Ch 5 Chapter 5(Elementalist)
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    Elementalist in a dungeon(Danmachi fanfiction)
    Anime & Comics · keanu_eugene
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  • dwaram31
    dwaram319mth
    Commented

    That really escalate quickly isn't it

    Ch 4 Chapter 4(Floor 1)
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    Elementalist in a dungeon(Danmachi fanfiction)
    Anime & Comics · keanu_eugene
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  • dwaram31
    dwaram312yr
    Commented

    First time I ever heard America banning people to holding on their guns

    "Since you're here I'm sure you know that this is a refugee, therefore any of your weapons which may bring harm to any individuals will be confiscated. There are other rules you should know once you go inside, but the guys in there will tell you. Is that cool with you?" Josh asked.
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    Pause System: Harem In The Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Renovator
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  • dwaram31
    dwaram312yr
    Replied to KimJungTao

    It contain water. So it will still do the job

    As he pulled out a packet of crisps, some chocolate bars, and a wrapped ham and cheese sandwich from one of the refrigerators, his stomach growled, begging him to hurry. He also pulled out a fizzy bepsi bottle.
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    Pause System: Harem In The Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Renovator
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  • dwaram31
    dwaram312yr
    Commented

    Drink first you dimwit. To this point I hate how much illogical the story is and how dumb and lack of general knowledge the author had.

    As he pulled out a packet of crisps, some chocolate bars, and a wrapped ham and cheese sandwich from one of the refrigerators, his stomach growled, begging him to hurry. He also pulled out a fizzy bepsi bottle.
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    Pause System: Harem In The Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Renovator
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  • dwaram31
    dwaram312yr
    Replied to DeusaderVulting

    It's his job to make logical story but no he didn't made one. I would kill the author if he appears before me by now

    Gray sighed, he could've fought and killed that zombie, but he didn't want to get any blood on his back pack or himself. He had just changed clothes too.
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    Pause System: Harem In The Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Renovator
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  • dwaram31
    dwaram312yr
    Commented

    Pretty sure virus can't be filtered

    There was also no telling how the virus spread. It could have probably infected the city's water tanks by now. Therefore, having this would definitely be useful.
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    Pause System: Harem In The Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Renovator
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  • dwaram31
    dwaram312yr
    Replied to Renovator

    So many plothole and yet you still keep writing!!? My mood was sour before and it became more sour after reading your fucking shit!!!!!

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    Pause System: Harem In The Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Renovator
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  • dwaram31
    dwaram312yr
    Commented

    Author there's this thing called death from hunger and dehydration. Are you stupid enough to think we'll believe that the mc lived through with his will alone. You either change this arc or I'll give 1 star on the review

    - 7th Day. Present.
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    Pause System: Harem In The Apocalypse
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  • dwaram31
    dwaram312yr
    Commented

    Ould have been dead already just looking at his hp alone

    "If I hadn't paused his fist in the last second… I'd be dead."
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    Pause System: Harem In The Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Renovator
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  • dwaram31
    dwaram312yr
    Replied to SHIVAM_Chouksey

    Author you need to learn better grammar. Your English is suck and unreadable

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    Dual Cultivator Reborn[System In The Cultivation World]
    Fantasy · SHIVAM_Chouksey
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  • dwaram31
    dwaram312yr
    Commented

    Who is this berat guy? I forgot completely about him

    "I suggest you disband your old guild and start a new one. You will be the sole guild leader and put Berat as management. He is good at that stuff."
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    Re: Evolution Online
    Fantasy · Yolohy
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  • dwaram31
    dwaram312yr
    Posted

    Well written but the author decide to leave all the mc by luck instead of effort. He always survive by luck, never by his own strength. Also the author would always make the plot walk two step ahead and then 3 step backwards. Always making the mc weak for some purpose after getting him strengthened. If you like this kind of progression then sadly you're pathetic beta masochist guy. Perhaps the author too. It was good at first and then it went downfall every time the mc got weakened. For instance the mc got stronger after training but then the author give him psychological trauma. After he got his magic back his consciousness realm got shattered. The author lack in creativity to make a challenge to the mc like every 3rd grade chinese author does. Also there's no single female lead that are likeable in here. Ian is fucking failure as tsundere, she's always mad at him and never gave a cuteness to the mc. If the author didn't describe that she was a girl and she actually like the mc we would be just consider her as a jerk. Est lack in sincerity despite she said that she likes the mc first, she even said that she will turn the mc into a woman because she was cursed to be a man despite the mc lack of relation to her curse, it was not his fault she turn into man, he didn't even know that she was cursed. It's like saying she will cut his dick off and feminized him so he can fuck him later because she screw up in the past. Fucking disgusting imo. And Wendy is just Wendy, a burden that are depicted as a cute girl.

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    Reincarnated With The Strongest System
    Fantasy · Elyon
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  • dwaram31
    dwaram312yr
    Commented

    Est is the worst FL. Confirmed. If she were to die I would celebrate it

    "I have a better idea." A mischievous smile appeared on Est's face as she said her proposal. "How about I ask Lady Astrid to turn you into a girl instead? That way, I can marry you. It's a win-win situation for both of us. What do you think?"
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    Reincarnated With The Strongest System
    Fantasy · Elyon
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  • dwaram31
    dwaram312yr
    Replied to YAGOOEMON

    Yeah same. Without a female lead it's like reading an impotent mc which is very unrelateable

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    Hero of Darkness
    Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
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  • dwaram31
    dwaram312yr
    Replied to CrimsonWolfAuthor

    Honestly a novel without a woman interaction whose heart heart is dead and will reject every woman advance is fucking boring. If you can only write those kind of novel you should stop writing one.

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    Hero of Darkness
    Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
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  • dwaram31
    dwaram312yr
    Commented

    Lol he will be his wife

    Isaac's Earth's Magic and Ian's Water Magic worked hand in hand to fire projectiles at the Cyclops's eye. These attacks didn't deal any damage to the eye itself, but it annoyed the giant to the point that it was focusing its attacks on them.
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    Reincarnated With The Strongest System
    Fantasy · Elyon
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