Look i Like the Story Idea the Charakter developement and would Like to ready the Story until IT ends good Work

thank you for your review i think about overgoing my Story and rewrite it

i try but this is my Seconds Story and English ist Not my first language i will become better with other Storys and the more i Writer thank you for Reading

Just Enjoy the Story

nothin i Just Like to include it

Maybe. English isn´t my first Langue because of that i am Describing it really vaguelly i try to learn in the process and maybe in the future i will write another cyberpunk story different this time

i know but i startet the Story in a hurry and somohow Made the Story a Bit wrong but still thanks for Reading i Hope you will Like my other drafts when i make them

I will be Shameless and promote my own story it´s after all still a good story to read look forward to my other story´s and if you can please understand that im not a perfect writer and i still need to learn many thinks

it would habe been realy good if the author would update regually the design of the charackter in the star wars world would have unlimited potential i dont know what the author would have written about the world im bummed that he didnt write more

i actually Like this fanfiction If you Update until the end than it would be perfekt cause i dont want you to drop this fanfiction it IS different to the other Harry Potter fanfiction 💪👍

i think you should save her and make her an ai Like alt in the Game

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